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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:24 pm

Name: Kiyomi Senshin
Nickname/Alias: Kirigakure's Blue Leech
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Looks:

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Kiyomi has blue, spiky hair pointing down that covers his left eye. He has orange eyes with great vision, particular for spotting hidden or blurred-shadow figures. Kiyomi has a small nose also with a great sense of smell on his round face which possess peach-cold cheeks. His mouth is usually a neutral frown and he has a pointed chin. Two rows of traingular, sharpened teeth lies in his mouth. He possess ears with excellent hearing, as he could detect even a slight vibration around a ten meter radius. His body has multiple layers of clothing. The first part is a layer of bandages wrapped around his chest and elbows. These bandages cover the multiple wounds he has suffered from the war to his current ANBU life. A steel chestplate is placed in these bandages to further protect Kiyomi from metal projectiles. On top of that, Kiyomi wears a formal shinobi black shirt that is usually worn under chainplates for Chunin and Jounin-level shinobi (such as Kakashi, Iruka, and Deidara). A gray jacket is worn on him on top of his shirt with a unique pattern that symbolizes him as a member of the Senshin clan. This pattern is only known to Kirigakure shinobi or high level ninja who have studied Kirigakure's history. The jacket spreads from his neck down to his knees and it sticks out of his fourth and final layer of clothing. Worn on Kiyomi that is mostly seen by people is a set of blue robes. Attached from his shoulders to the middle part of his chest appears to be a blue scarf-like article of clothing. This piece serves a basic function to keep Kiyomi's chest and arms warm under Kirigakure's wet, rainy, and cold conditions and climate.

Dark-blue robes emerge under his shoulders and extends towards his legs. These robes are basically Kiyomi's battle uniform and is rarely discarded. The robes cover everything but his arms. Two red wristbands are attached to his wrists and a strip cutted from a light-blue long sleeved shirt are also attached to his arms. Kiyomi wears rough black ninja leggings with two pockets on each pair. Two pockets contain a small mash of Kuroshuu, one pocket contains two summoning scrolls; acting as subsitute jacket pouches, and one pocket contains a small blade. One small blade is also attached to his pants. Attached on his two hips are larger ninja pouches filled with shinobi equipment consisting of senbon, kunai, shuriken, scrolls, and small blades. He wears sandals with two kunai strapped to them under the bottom of his sandal where he can quickly reach for it to attack enemies, especially when he is captured. Attached to his back are usually either bunches of small blades are Mokusuikami. Kiyomi stands at 7"2 feet tall and weighs only 97 lbs. He possess a thin but strong body built for speed and endurance. On a seperate side, Kiyomi is also a member of Kirigakure's ANBU Black Op Hunter-Nins. He wears a formal ANBU Black Op uniform but with a few custom modifications. Kiyomi's ANBU Mask is the face of a water serpent-dragon spirit hybrid or an enraged "Naga." His black shirt remains but he now has a blue armored chestplate with steel metal guards attached to his arms. A gray leather piece of clothing covers his shoulders and he wears his blue robes instead of a black/white one to fit his outfit. Kiyomi's leggings remain as he dosen't want to be far off from Kirigakure's ANBU. A signature spiral symbol is tattooed to his left shoulder to signify him as an ANBU Black Op. Attached to his back are two Ninjato blades from which he is quite proficient at due to his knowledge of vital areas in the body and his excellency in swordmanship. When cloaked in his ANBU outfit, Kiyomi feels like a real assassin.






Personality:

Kiyomi is a calm, patient, and cool man. He's very observant of enemy movement and can analyze their styles and jutsus to formulate the best strategy to overrun them,.During the midst of a violent battle, Kiyomi rarely panics as he simply keeps his eyes on the opponent. One of the qualities he possess that makes him such an excellent tactician is that during times of excessive pressure, he's able to seize control of himself, relax, and study the situation. He looks for key advantages that the enviroment throws at him. He can study how people move, how fast they can weave signs, how fast they are, how strong they are, the techniques they use, and their fighting styles and combine them for amazing anticipation skills almost as if he can predict an enemy's next attack, in the sense he has an extremely keen eye that is able to study enemies in his own particular special way that he can make guesses to anticipate the enemy's next attack and react quickly. This is an ability that marks Kiyomi as an outstanding shinobi tactician, but his status as a battler than an observer overcomes that value. He speaks in a clear and calm tone, only interrupting and sharing information when its is called for or when he is needed to. However, Kiyomi has a weak tie with his family and clan and has broken off from them. He does not expect any surprises from anyone but pretends he does. He is also known for potraying fake emotions that utterly confuses people. Because of his lack of expectations, Kiyomi never tried out for being an official sensei.

Being from the Hunter-Nin Division, Kiyomi is good at concealment of his identity. He is to never reveal any personal information to targets as it could upset their chances of capturing and assassinating them. Furthermore, he is under good control of his own emotions due to his gruesome training in the ANBU division and the fact that his heritage is of Kirigakure, a village who has earned quite a feared nickname for its barbaric and brutal methods of becoming actual shinobi. However, when situations are at their grimmest, he shows immense murderous intent and raging killer instinct to kill off the enemies at all costs. He shows manners to the Mizukage and is quite loyal to him. Kiyomi's intelligence and analysis level is considered to be the top best or close second. He listens very carefully and is relied to lead Kirigakure to battle. He is quite deceptive on the amount of trust he places on his comrades. Kiyomi places a great deal of trust on others, but frequently, his trust turns to deception and his downfall because alot of people can take advantage of him and manipulate his own will to their own. That's why it's so hard for Kiyomi's ability to think clearly and smartly versus his habit of believing others. But even Kiyomi knows who is an ally and who is a rouge. Kiyomi is very persistent in training his own power, as he increased his energy to massive chakra levels even a little abnormal for a near Kage-level ninja like him. Because he hardly argues, Kiyomi is quite coorperative and works well in times of teamwork. As he matures to Kage, his leadership skills have grown.






Clan Information

Clan Name: Senshin Clan
Kekkei Genkai:

Kuroshuu - The Black Blob

Spoiler:
Clan Symbol: Kiyomi Senshin Shinkinclansymbol
Clan Jutsu:

Name: Black Blob Projectile Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close-Long (0-25 meters)
Description: Kuroshuu Dangan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. First, the Kuroshuu user generates the mass from inside of them, building it up near their gullet. While storing chakra to these masses, the user expels the mass projectiles which travels at high speeds, aiming to stick to its target. As this is the most basic jutsu to Kuroshuu users, after three seconds of the Kuroshuu limiting the movement of the target, it'll start to absorb the substance. This technique is especially useful while aiming for the joints.

Name: Black Blob Beam
Rank: D
Range: Close-Long (0-20 meters)
Description: Kuroshuu Kousen is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin Clan. First, the user generates a single black mass from inside them. Then, the'll expel it at the victim where it'll be less varying and slower than Kuroshuu Dangan but the single mass would be bigger than it. After three seconds, the Kuroshuu can suck out blood.

Name: Black Blob Hand
Rank: D
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Hando is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. The user leeks Kuroshuu through tiny openings in their hands and builds it up so a small amount appears on their fingers or palm. The user would conceal this to launch a surprise attack. After engaging in close combat, the user simply touches the effected hand or slap it towards the enemy to stick the mass onto them. The mass will start to pierce through their skin and suck the substance. Of course, enemies can just peel this off and quickly fling it away to disable that.


Name: Black Blob Shape
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Katachi is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Utilizing the production organ and absorption energy power, Kuroshuu users are able to shape Kuroshuu into any shape they want. Users can then fire these formed weapons at opponents for a higher chance of them getting hit by the Kuroshuu. As a gelatin-like substance, these shapes can be hardened and toughened simply by filling it up with Suiton or Doton chakra (2-3 CP) to a solid. As a solid, they'll lose much of their stickiness but once they penetrate through one's skin, the Kuroshuu stabs into it and sucks the substance. Enemies would have to use alot of force to pull these solidfied Kuroshuu away.


Name: Black Blob Suspension Clouds
Rank: B
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Teishi Kumo is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kuroshuu users shapes pieces of Kuroshuu and molds them into a cloud-like appearance. With this, they can jump on it and levitate up to five feet in the air. However, users can solidfy the Kuroshuu (3 CP) and they can rise its user up to more higher heights reaching altitude levels of twenty feet. This is mainly used for transportation means as the user can fly on this cloud and reach nearby towns within a few minutes.

Name: Black Blob Dragon Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Ryudan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi manipulates Kuroshuu and shapes it so it can take the form of a long, dark dragon. Kiyomi can freely manipulate this dragon and can even change its direction. This dragon travels at great rates but not only does it deliver a powerful impact equalvalent to that of Konoha Gouriki Senpuu, but it also sticks to the opponent and pins them to a surface. Within a few seconds, the dragon would start sucking on the substance. Also, because it is made from Kuroshuu, part of the dragon can be changed by the user and formed into projectiles or attached weapons, but this is only due to the usage of other techniques such as Kuroshuu Katachi.


Name: Black Blob Recovery
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Dakkai is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. To reduce the disadvantage of Kuroshuu's weakness against Fuuton and Raiton, Kuroshuu users developed a way to make that happen. By channeling chakra to the damaged part or simply weaving a few handseals, the Kuroshuu user can regenerate the damaged mass and reform them together within a few seconds to make it whole once more and it continues its attack. Of course, it can be sliced again by another Fuuton technique.

Name: Black Blob Armor
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu no Yoroi is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. By pouring large amounts of Kuroshuu from their body and outside of them, Kiyomi can generate a body suit of protection made of Kuroshuu. This armor is commonly used against powerful attacks with a hard chance of blocking as the Kuroshuu armor can withstand nearly any attack and can also defend from huge explosive impact. The armor can block A-rank Taijutsu or lower, B-rank Ninjutsu or lower, most metal attacks, and explosions. Aside from using this as a last minute defense, Kiyomi can grab hold of enemies and stick to them, binding them. In just two seconds, the Kuroshuu armor would suck out the substance from the enemy's body and can be transferred to Kiyomi's body if he commands it. Kiyomi can also extend the Kuroshuu but only by three meters. Against multiple and continuous attacks that deals great impact (that are within the withstandment level), the Kuroshuu can reform back to Kiyomi's body to remake the armor almost instantly. In addition to the more elemental chakra or substance absorbed by the Kuroshuu the harder it is for the victim to move, the Kuroshuu can be extended outwards so that it conceals his entire body and cut him off view, Kiyomi can communicate with the Kuroshuu to view the outside world due to his unique gift with it.

Name: Black Blob Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Heki is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi forms the needed handseals and expels a great mass of Kuroshuu from his mouth. The mass would then shape into a barrier that provides protection against techniques of similiar rank (excluding Fuuton.)


Name: Black Blob Parachute
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Rakkasan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. By channeling Kuroshuu to any of his sides, Kiyomi can unleash it to a parachute-shaped structure. The mass is designed to soften the impact directed towards Kuroshuu users greatly or to avoid immense damage and pain.

Name: Black Blob Tidal Waves
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Tsunami is a special bloodline technique developed by Kiyomi Senshin. By gathering huge amounts of Kuroshuu, Kiyomi expels it all out in a wide, blanket-like blast. The wave would spread and downpour onto a surface. An opponent within the range (10 Meters) would be very unlucky. If the enemy is still away from the blast range, the Kuroshuu would suddenly chase after the victim and lunge for them until they stick to them, get pummeled by tremendous force, or get hit by a Fuuton technique of same rank. Once they're caught, the Kuroshuu would stick to them and bind them due to the large amount of mass. It'll be extremely difficult for the enemy to move. Once they're caught in this technique, within three seconds, the huge amounts of Kuroshuu would begin sucking on the victim's blood. The more blood they suck, the more harder they get. Because of the large amounts and increased absorption rate, all of their blood would be sucked within twelve posts (or four minutes). Once 1/2 of their blood has been suck, the Kuroshuu can enter the victim's body and rapidly suck out all of the blood. The Kuroshuu can even envelope the victim's heart and "control" it as it commands it to beat faster. Pumping more blood, the Kuroshuu absorbs it and the victim either dies from the overlimited heart beating or lack of blood. Either that or once 1/2 blood gets absorbed, Kiyomi can shape the Kuroshuu to cover the victim in mass bandages, resembling the victim as a mummy. Once this happens, the victim will be binded and cannot move. The Kuroshuu will continue sucking blood from all of the body points. Furthermore, even if the Kuroshuu detaches itself from the victim either by great force or struggling, it'll simply lunge back in at the victim as well as all the Kuroshuu, making a little chance for escpe once they get caught.

Name: Black Blob Limb Replacement
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Eda Atogama is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. This is a very useful technique when a Kuroshuu user's limb has been blown off or severed. Simply by focusing chakra to the Kuroshuu, Kiyomi can create a limb that replaces the one made from Kuroshuu that has been cutted off by forcing it through the damaged tissue. Kiyomi can then extend his new limb to attack or blob, or he can solidfy the limb to make it work as a solid limb. The Kuroshuu swells up the pain and stops the bleeding. When an attack penetrates through this limb, it simply slowly reforms back to its original state (unless hit by a Fuuton). This would also have the same abilities as Kuroshuu. However, constant chakra consumption is required so 2% of his chakra is removed for each post it is active before he runs out of chakra completely.


Name: Black Blob Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Kuiki is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi molds a huge ball of Kuroshuu from his mouth and uses it for two different ways. As huge amounts of chakra are stored there, Kiyomi can expel this and can push back merely any object to a surface and limit its movement as the Kuroshuu sucks away its blood. Another way can be that Kiyomi throws/pushes it against someone which toppls them over and does the same thing.

Name: Black Blob Prison
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuuro is a special bloodline technique utilize by the Senshin clan. By forming the needed handseals, Kiyomi manipulates Kuroshuu and creates a hemi-spherical barrier around his victim to trap them, cutting off connection. Inside the prison, ropes of Kuroshuu will emerge from the inside and strap themselves on the victim, binding them. They'll then instantly start sucking blood once they do. The more the victim struggles, the faster it sucks. Kiyomi can condense the prison to make it close in, limiting their space as well. By using the extracted blood, Kiyomi can cause the prison to internally expand as it incases the opponent.

Name: Black Blob Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Bunshin no Jutsu is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi creates a clone of himself using Kuroshuu as it inherits 1/10 of his power and chakra. This Bunshin can only use Kuroshuu techniques and Suiton techniques. Once in contact with someone, the Bunshin can stick to that person and begin absorbing their blood into their own, making them stronger and harder. Once they dispearse, they revert to a smll stream of Kuroshuu as it lands down the attacker.


Name: Black Blob Monster Beast
Rank: S
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Bakemono Yajuu is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi releashes enormous amounts of Kuroshuu from his body and shapes it to a giant, monstrous, beast-like appearance. After this, Kiyomi can control this beast however he likes. The best would walk towards its target, making short trembles. Once the beast touches the target, they get absorbed into the beast's body. Within the body, the victim would find it extremely hard to move if not they'll be completely binded. Within the beast, the Kuroshuu would absorv the victim's blood slowly but in large quantities. The beast can send these blood amounts in Kuroshuu packages back to Kiyomi who absorbs it in him. The longer the victim stays within the beast, the more blood it sucks out. The best can then move on to absorb within more victims and so be able to disable multiple shinobi. Part of the beast can be manipulated by the Kuroshuu user. The more blood it sucks, the tougher it gets. It seems that the only way to destroy this beast is either a high level (B+), large Fuuton technique or a humongous explosion attack. A simple drop of poison can slowly diminish this beast as well except the victims in there have a high chance of getting infected. This beast can also be destroyed by another object with a similiar size that delivers tremendous force. Kiyomi can take advantage of the destroyed Kuroshuu for other techniques.

Name: Thousand Black Blob Rain
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Chikuroshuu Ame is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin Clan. Kiyomi molds hundreds of Kuroshuu into small bullets that he can use to attack the opponent. He can manipulate them to attack from multiple directions, multiple angles, and warding multiple attacks. With a large amount of mass, the opponent has a low chance of escaping, however this bullets are actually made to attach to the enemy as they have a low attack power. They can be hardened (5 CP) to be as hard and dangerous as bronze items. When attached to an enemy, they can begin sucking out blood.

Clan History:

The origins of the Senshin clan are known only to the clan's elders. Due to history, there was once man named Hiru. Hiru was the son of one of Rikudou Sennin's prized pupils and had great chakra control and high intellegence... yet he couldn't master a single element. One day when he was outside moon gazing, he saw a meteorite passing by. The meteor zoomed past the town he was in and landed, giving out a huge explosion. Hiru extended his chakra, shaped it to a cloud, hardened it, then flew on it to the direction of where the meteor hitted. Once he arrived, he inspected the out-space object. Suddenly, the meteor started to crack and a large, oozing, red, blob-like substance oozed out of the meteor. Hiru was shocked and fell to his knees. More and more of that mass flew out of the meteor until its size could fit three humans. The blob seemed to be studying Hiru. Preapring to attack the "jelly", Hiru activated his chakra. The sudden trigger of energy stimulated the blob's senses and it lunged towards Hiru, preparing to habitat inside of his body and make him a "host." However, Hiru's abnormally powerful chakras had sealed the blob in and he took control over its powers. Communicating with the alien object, he discovered that it was a creature from another planet with no appearance nor true shape. However, the blob had called himself "Senshin." And so, the more Hiru and Senshin talked, the closer they grew together as the blob slowly starts to spread itself in Hiru's body, Hiru enjoyed the sense of friendship and a new power at his hand. In exchange for letting it leave in his body, Senshin shall protect Hiru and his worthy descendents. And so Hiru had fully named himself Hiru Senshin. He gained the power to manipulate the blob and to convert his chakra to absorption forces. When Hiru moved from the Earth Country to the Water Country he was stunned to meet a beautiful maid there. Hiru grew in love with her and within three years, they got married. However things would soon become tragic... as the maid was a user of the Suiton element. After the maid who was known as Tatmea Senshin bore two children, Hiru started to get thirsty. Tatmea gave Hiru a kiss and expelled a Suiton drop inside of him to quench his thirst. However as that happened, the Suiton chakra traveled down to Hiru's body, from where it reached the blob and awakened it. Suiton especially in its host's body makes the blob quite hungry... and quite big too. The blob formed an organ behind Hiru's heart from where it left his back without his permission. Hiru, deep in his slumber, suddenly heard as if something was sucking on someone. When he opene his eyes, he was horrified of what he had saw. He noticed his wife grasping for breath and holding on for her dear life as Senshin started to steal away her life force. Tatmea grabbed for Hiru's hand but before they can touch, her hand slackened as she laid dead. Hiru, enraged, started to pull Senshin away from her. tatmea's father, the great Wizard called "Kisai" noticed a change in his daughter's soul will. He mutterd a spell and teleported to her location. He was horrified as he saw his daughter dead... by the hands of her own husband that he disapproved of. The wizard casted a spell towards Hiru that binded him. Then, the wizard looked at his own grandsons. he then muttered a spell that shall kill them. In an attemptt o save them, Hiru lurged towards his sons. Suddenly, a huge amount of blob erupted from Hiru's back as they defended his two sons. the wizard's curse got tangled and was reduced as it affected the blob which hosted inside the baby's bodies. Hiru then forced the blob to attack the wizard, sucking away his life force. The wizard died witin ten seconds, hence Hiru killed his wife and his father-in-law. Hiru looked at the blob that was rapidly hosting inside his son's body. Not only will they inherit his blob powers... but they would also carry on the curse. So Hiru sealed the original Senshin within his own body, cutting off the power so it can never be used again. Or at least for him. Hiru raised his boys in the Water Country. When the boys reached 28, Hiru had died... and so did Senshin. However, Shourai Senshin and Sunjin Senshin, had moved on with their powers. Both can use blob powers but they were slightly different. One is that they didn't have a mind of their own like Senshin..... they only displayed a singular absorption trait when Senshin can suck in fifteen... and instead of being red.. they were black. The curse of the wizard had changed the blob.... for the better. That power known as Kuroshuu became feared among the Water Country. It is rumored that a great Naga shielded the two Senshins from fearful attackers. Shourai and Sunjin populated the family they dubbed the Senshin Clan and it a century later, it became one of the most respected... and the most feared family in Kirigakure. However, a Senshin gaining Kuroshuu is very rare even within the bloodline. It is considered so scary and rare that a maximum of five Senshins showing that they can use Kuroshuu appears each century... and it still remains five at a time. During the Fourth Great Ninja World War, two Kuroshuu users were sent to the battlefield but were killed for dealing such a high sabotage at Sunagakure. There're now only three Kuroshuu users, and until another forty-five years pass, it would stay as three Kuroshuu users. Apart from that, non-Kuroshuu Senshin clan members have a great tie to the Suiton element that they can use it with high ease and in high speed.



Rank Information:
Country: Kiri no Kuni
Village Rank: High Jounin/S-rank ANBU of Kirigakure's "Hunter-Nin" Division
Skill Rank: S



Skill Information

Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Suiton
Sub: Raiton

Special Characteristics:

- Ability to weave handseals at incredible rapid rates (Only apperable when Kiyomi is at near-full to full stamina, which be the first twenty posts within a battle before this trait slowly diminishes)

-Kiyomi has reflexes and instincts honed by ten warrior shinobi from which he can respond to attacks quickly.

- Master Tactician-Observation Skills

- "Living" Inner Kuroshuu

- Enhanced Senses (Smell, Sight, Hearing)

- Special Training where Kiyomi has developed the rare ability to know exactly where all of the vital points in the body are located and is able to strike at them with weapons to cause enormous pain or/and massive damage.





Items/Weapons:

x25 Kunai
x30 Shuriken
x2 Summoning Scrolls (each with eight summoning spaces)
x7 Small Blades
x2 Ninjato (Usually Sealed)
x5 Exploding Tags
x4 Smoke Bombs
x1 Flash Bombs



Name: Mokusuikami (x2)
Appearance: Kiyomi Senshin Mokusuikami
Rank: A-S
Special Abilities:

Right Mokusuikami: This blade has the ability to change its metallic blade into a long, fast, deadly water ship when Kiyomi surges C-rank level chakra to it. This whip travels at high speeds and can extend to a mid-range distance (0-10 meters). This whip has high cutting power at the level of a Raiton and is best used to pierce through regular Ninjato, Katana, or Iron objects. But it's most greatest ability is its power to bind people. The whip can travel around an opponent's body and squeeze their limbs together, immobolizing them. From there, the whip can slowly cut deep into the opponent's skin layers, where it cannot cut any further when all skin layers are pierced. This can be defeated by C-rank Doton techniques of course, Raiton techniques travels across the water and stuns Kiyomi releasing the victim, Fuuton and Suiton blades are able to cut through the whip if released from the mouth, but A-rank Katon techniques will be nullified. It can also be demolished by shinobi with Taijutsu as a main skill and uses a B-rank technique with their highly muscular (or athletic/trained- at the level of Guy) to break through this whip. Metal projectiles including swords are not very efficient against cutting through this whip when binded, unless they're elemental enhanced large blades. This blade can also transform into a flowing liquid blade. Its length depends on the amount of Suiton chakra channeled into it. D-rank chakra is five inches, C-rank chakra is twenty, B-rank chakra is three feet, A-rank chakra is five feet, and S-rank chakra is seven feet. The blade itself is able to cut like a Raiton-enhanced metal blade.

Left Mokusuikami: This Mokusuikami blade has the ability to absorb half of the chakra of all B-rank techniques of Kiyomi's elements (meaning this blade can absorb 50% of all B-rank Suiton and Raiton techniques directed at Kiyomi and their attack damage). With the absorbed chakra, Kiyomi channels B-rank level chakra into the blade to shoot out multiple water blades. This water blades travels at fast speeds and it's cutting power is at the level of a Fuuton. The overall power and speed of the water blades makes it difficult for the target(s) to avoid. Kiyomi can only shoot out up to ten water blades and there is a six post interval before he can use it again. Kiyomi can only use these water blades twenty times before he runs out of chakra completely. B-rank Doton techniques are most efficient in deflecting this. Eight water blades directed at a specific limb is all that's enough to cut it off. These water blades can also be enhanced with Raiton so taht it'll take five enahnced water blades to sever a limb. This blade's second ability is that it can gather up all of the moisture in the air around a five meter radius and use it to cover the blade in a layer of "solid-like" water. THis enhancement not only gives further attack range, but Kiyomi can spill 20% more blood on anyone it hits.



Origin: The Mokusuikami is said to be a pair of legendary blades made by the Kirigakure blacksmith known as "Kanten" who was a follower of Suijin: The Water God. To spread Suijin's will over to Kirigakure, Kanten used a number of rare and valuable items and metals around the Land of Water and he fashioned it into two special blades known as Mokusuikami ~ Silent Water God. However, during a civil war, the blade was given to a Kirigakure elder. That Kirigakure elder who was Kiyomi Senshin's grandfather, was passed down until Kiyomi reached 23, where he inherited the Mokusuikami and went to unlcok its abilities. It is said that the twin Mokusuikami used together is able to overcome and render enemies useless. Kiyomi's mastery over the Kenjutsu skill makes him a proficient swordmen with this particular blade as well as with other unique swords.



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" I'll back you up"

"'Earth Style: Head Hunter Groundhog Jutsu (Double Suicide Decipitation Technique)"

Egress heads and travels underground.....
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Egress's hand appear out of the ground and pulled fredo down to the ground up to the neck. The fire came closer and reached fredo, the flames concealing and burning him....

Egress swifted away to face nami and harry...

"Sharingan!"

Time for the real battle to start
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'What a massive compression of chakra..." Egress analyzed...

"Time for my best jutsu.."

"Chidori! 1000 Birds!!"

With Zero aiming for Nami, Egress aimed for Harry.

With both of the jutsus connecting..... thr fight will be over....
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Egress dodged all those kunais but had two cut off part of his hair...

Another mystery ninja......

"Shame all three for your other comrades have died....."
Egress glares his Sharingan at him.....
Hmmm, something feels familiar about him.... he thought
Naruto Way:
Sharingan!
Lighting Blade!
Egress charges in and stabs a rib of SonicWave's
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Egress performs a mixture of handsigns
Fire Style: Great Dragon Inferno
Two huge dragonheads appeared in each hand. Egress goes underground and throws the huge dragonheads up from the groundhole upward to SonicWave, the dragonheads flamed SonicWave's body, but missed as the heads fly away.
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With SonicWave distracted, Egress teleports away.
"Body Teleportation!"
His whole body teleports back to Konoha, using a diserable amount of chakra.
Lord Dread, I have the plans!

My First Day at Naruto Life:
Egress Uchiha walsk into the academy of the twilight Village. He enters the classroom adn sits upon a desk... He suddenly notices a great ninja before him... " Hello, I wish to become a ninja of the Twilight Village


You may call me Egress- Egress Uchiha, orphan of the Leaf. And what may i call you, sensei? (Zero-sensei?)


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True Shinobi Legends

Scorching over the dark and deep forest, Airon jumped from tree by tree to search for the kidnapper. You gotta be here somewhere.... he thought. Suddenly, he heared a slight sound in a bush below him. "Ha! There you are!" Airon took out a handful of sand from a tube and mixed it with chakra, converting it with a magnetic force. Suddenly, the sand blacken and harden, its chemical and physical state transforming. Airon extending the iron snad into a huge spike and smash it down onto the bush. A dark figure quickly emerged from the bush and flickered into a safe spot...

Landing on the bottom of his spike, Airon took a closer peek at the mysterious intruder that stole his student. He saw a man with red hair and black robes covering him neck to toe. "Where is she?!" yelled Airon. "You'll never find her! She is with us now.." replied the kidnapper. He took out two swords from his back and threatened him. "Hmph, you're ignorance dosent scare me..." said Airon bravely. Weaving a single handsign, the huge spike behind him dispearsed and headed stragiht towards their target! The iron sand binded the stranger's arms and legs and he fell to the ground. "Gah.. you cant stop us. We have much more stronger forces with us now that we possess her talent.." he announced. Airon looked deep into the man's eyes... "I don't care... I wont stop till I find her and secure her back to the village.." said Airon. He contuined his search again, jumping tree by tree to find his kidnapped disciple.. leaving the ANBU Black Ops to the red-haired man... Don't worry Hiami... I will find you...




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Shinobi Awakening

Battle Between Taco Maneki and Uchiha Egress

Maneki:
It was a bright sunny day and the wind was blowing lightly on maneki.He was enjoying this time of peace until a fly was blown straight into his mouth.After several moments of gagging up a fly he remembered why he was their.He was going to be having a fight against someone.He had posted invites to the fight all over the hidden villages stating that the first to show up would be the one fighting him.In anticipation for the fight he unsheathed his sword and just waited.To pass the time of waiting he decided to place a few manual explosive tags around the area.After placing 5 around the area he went back to waiting.

Egress:

Egress entered the battle arena during a cool, windy day. He looked around the enviroment to search for his opponent. Why was Egress here in the first place? Although he has been expired from ANBU, Egress could never surpass the urge to perform assassination... which can be the reason why he still wears his uniform under his robes. But now his robes were removed, his outfit still intact, and his Konoha headband laced on a red bandana glittered produly on his forehead. Two Ninjato blades were attached to his back and he possessed two equipment pouches full of ninja tools. Egress's hair was being blown on by the wind. Tuck in his purple ANBU vest, were bunches of summoning scrolls that he can utilize to call in an item for battle. Even still he's Hokage, he needed to take a break once in a while. He actually cannot believe that by assigning himself a S-rank actually got him out of the village. Egress stopped walking until he saw a figure across the distance. Could that be him...? wondered Egress. He remained silent until he got a closer look. He neared the figure, placing a hand on one of his swords to get ready for combat...

Maneki:
Maneki was whistling to pass the still bored from having to wait.Then he heard a noise and to his surprise saw what appeared to be a member of the anbu black ops of the leaf village.He said to the guy "hello their i am maneki taco of the hidden mist village you must be here because you answered my ad so im ready when ever you are you can have the first move."Now he waited for his opponent to make his move He was gonna gauge how strong this guy was depending on what he did.

Egress:
Egress adopted a battle stance after his opponent had identified himself. "Maneki Taco of Kirigakure, nice to meet you... I'm Egress Uchiha of Konoha, I'll begin our match then," introuduced Egress. A sense of murderous intent filled up in Egress starting with a small amount, as long as his opponent gets more challenger, his killer instinct will rise as well. He unsheathed one of his Ninjato and surged his chakra to it. First I shall make some judgements on him. Since he's from Kirigakure, he's likely to possess the Suiton element which is quite a bother, and the man looks like above his teenage years so probably he's a Jounin-level ninja. assumed Egress. He will not underestimate this opponent, who knows what tricks his enemies has up his sleeves. During the beginning of combat, he will attempt to not utilize the Sharingan... but the powers of his Sora Juin. He was merely eight meters away from his opponent and begun his usual combat method. First are the elements and what skill expertise he possess! decided Egress. He took out his Ninjato blade, remove its wooden container from his back, and converted the chakra to Raiton. Raiton: Raiken! emitted Egress. He ran a few feet towards Maneki and threw his Raiton-enhanced metal sword at him. As the lightning projectile is flung in the air, Egress took out a kunai from his shinobi pouch, twirled it, and gripped onto it for some defense purposes.

Maneki:
Maneki was surprised to be fighting egress Uchiha.Being of the Uchiha clan their was the chance he would have the sharingan.Then egress threw a sword from what he had said was imbued with raiton chakra.To block the attack maneki used his sword to deflect the blow and said "now its my turn."He charged at egress and drew out his swords diamond aura for the attack.when close enough he slashed at his foot being that it isn't an obvious attack.Well with his free hand he drew out a kunai to defend himself just in case his attack didn't work.

Egress:
Egress watched as his Raiton projectile was easily defeated by the his opponent's own sword attack. Seeing his opponent charging towards him, Egress began to back up four meters and threw his kunai. He instantly weaved three handseals in a second and he superheated chakra stored in his gullet to Katon. A sword... a Kirigakure ninja... could he be... one of those wretched Seven Swordsmen?! wondered Egress. Egress smiled as today he would have his long time revenge. "You know.. my own sensei was slaughtered by a Kirigakure shinobi.. one of those seven swordsmen.." told Egress. "Are you one of them?" he asked. After that, he blew out a huge Katon attack as the large mass grew and rapidly raced towards Maneki to incinerate him. "Katon: Zukkoku!" expelled Egress. Egress was already several feet away from Maneki as his swing was made and his KAton attack burned to it. Now he would uncover his opponent's elements.

Maneki:
Maneki sword had missed hitting egress and now egress had a fire jutsu heading straight for maneki.Even though he didn't want to he had only one way to block an attack in this kind of pinch.He activated his curse seal covering him in a flame armor this was his power seals 2ed form.since it is a higher level then egress attack he came out of the attack unscathed.He then charged at egress slashing from from the right at egress well watching his feet slightly to counter in case of a movement.

Egress:

Egress watched as his Katon attack was pulverized by Maneki who's body apepared to be covered in flames. Katon affinity..? wondered Egress. Interesting... let's see what other elements he possess... Egress surged his own Sky Curse Seal to a level one form. Energy and strength flowed through Egress's veins and throughout his entire body. I wonder how long has it been since I used this... perhaps I shall show him that the Dark Raven shall rise again.. he thought. Seeing Maneki laying an attack on him, he would use another technique to stop that from connecting. Forming a couple of handseals, he unleashed a Raiton technique. Raiton: Shichuu Shibari! conjoured Egress. Four long pillars were summoned from the ground around Maneki, giving off the illusion of a Doton technique. However a second later, lightning was released from the cardinal pillars to contain anything within it... then it sended a huge electric charge that shall paralyze and bind anything within its range. Let's see him reveal more and more of his abilities... Shame for Egress, he had already revealed his two only elemental affinities.

Maneki:

Maneki with his current armor could not be hurt by anything under a rank jutsu.Lucky for maneki egress didn't know he had that power so he let the attack hit him and then started to act.He then began to scream in pain maneki was an excellent actor.Then he said "curse you eg...."Then pretended to pass out and fell to the ground fully ready to counter attack.

Egress:

Egress watched as his Raiton attack had worked but was slightly puzzled. The level of the attack should have caused only stunning, not pain. He really must be weak... thought Egress. However, the Katon armor told Egress to go no further. Might as well extinguish that first... then cut through his heart.. He fumbled with his ninja pouch then took out three kunais with exploding tags attached to them. With a might, he threw those explosive projectiles at Maneki in an effort to at least konocj him back so Egress can see his chest.

Maneki:

Maneki saw that eg was throwing kunais at him.He opened his eyes and said "gotcha."Maneki was ling on a explosive tag he had set on the ground.He did the hand seal and the tag exploded sending maneki into the air unharmed and causing the kunais to stop.Maneki regained his balance well in the air and landed safely. He then put his sword in front of him and got ready to attack.He charged at egress and began to charge chakra into the tip of his sword.upon contack the sword will cause an explosion.He tehn swung at full force at egress downward at his head.

Egress:

Egress had noticed that Maneki was still conscious and released chakra throughout his entire body around the surrounding area. Playing possum eh.... I'm beginning to figure out his style... observed Egress. As Maneki headed to slash down at Egress's head, Egress supercharged the chakra to Raiton to make it to an electric current. "Raiton: Chidori Nagashi!" emitted Egress. The electric zone provided an excellent defense for Egress as if Maneki's body were to come in contact with a current, his attack would be repelled and be paralyzed for short periods of time.

Maneki:

Maneki saw that eg made no attempt to dodge his attack.The he heard a noise it sounded like chirping. He had heard of this jutsu it was chidori and it was protecting his body. He quickly activated his seals 3ed form allowing him to quickly switch from his fire armor to his lightning armor.Being of the same element egress armor would not be able to block his attack but chances were that his arm would be numbed.his His sword went seeding towards egress head causing a jolt to run through manekis arm unaffaecting the speed and power of the swing thanks to the armor.

Egress:


Egress observed as his opponent's Katon armour changed to a Raiton one. Raiton affinity as well? Challenging... thought Egress. With Maneki's attack just a couple of meters above his head, Egress planned to stop that attack and land an attack at Maneki from the side. And so it begins... that the Dark Raven awakens once more! Utilizing his partial transformation skills, two, large, black-feathered, wings erupted from Egress's back. These wings were like that of a bird's except quite bigger.. and under the wing hidden by darkness are five, small fingers. Egress quickly jumped to his right side with his wings coming along with him as his left wing took the blow for him and Maneki's attack sliced right through it. Egress went ahead to strike his right wing at Maneki's head but suddenly felt an unsettling feeling on his wounded wing. This... dosen't feel good... he thought. Instead, Egress immedaitely jumped aside to make a a far distance between them and could notice a giant explosion of energy erupting from Maneki. Egress shielded himself with his wounded wing, pushed off the ground, and attempted to fly. Boosh! The resulting explosion scarred the entire battlefield.

When the smoke cleared up, Egress's body was not seen. It would seem that he's entire body was blown to smithereens but if we were to turn our heads to the air.. we would see a man with strange marks over his body and what appears as a black wing soaring twelve feet high in the skies. Egress sacrificed his left wing in order to buy him some time to take flight in the air and escape from the blast radius. Still flying in the air with only one wing, Egress retracted the damaged tissue from his destroyed wing back to his body. Better the pain than the blood loss. High in the air, Egress briefly enjoyed the moment of superiority and a chance to fly again. But his opponent was bound to figure out his abilities. The blast wave not only destroyed one of his wing but also left some scars and wound on his left arm, but it was still functional. Egress looked down at Maneki for some analysis. That was some explosion... such a jutsu... he observed. The memories of his survival flowed through him. That explosion occured within a second his sword pierced through my wing just when I was about to hit him... he must have erected a probe around him that he can activate any time to set off the explosion... assumed Egress. Egress tried for another expierment to test out Maneki's abilities. Soon, he would skip to the next battle phase. Raiton and Katon affinities, chakra manipulation activation, and mastery over the blade... a tricky opponent but I best might just rely on Sora Juin.. he thought. Egress took out an exploding kunai and threw it below him at Maneki. Egress is now trying to see how fast his opponent can move and how fast they can react to attacks. It was needed for his next strategy.

Maneki:
Maneki though he had defeated his opponent and was ready to celebrate when he saw egress flying in the sky. Maneki then saw and heard a kunai coming towards.To cancels out the kunai attack he picked up the kunai with an exploding that that egress had thrown but never detonated. He then threw it at the other kunai when they connected it caused a massive explosion. He then tossed a 2ed exploding tag into the smoke with the cover of the smoke it was highly doubtful that egress was gonna see it in time to dodge it.Then he also switched back to his fire armor in case of a counter attack from egress.

Egress:

Egress watched from five meters high in the sky analysing Maneki's movements with his wing constantly ascending. He had seen his kunai gone off and EGress squinted his eyes to judge the impact. Either he used another probe detection.... or he used his quick reactions.. concluded Egress. His sense of hearing must be a great weapon to him... disabling it would be tricky, meaning I can no longer deal death blows to him from far distances... have to get closer... he formulated. Then, he saw some of the smoke flushing away and a blunt object speeding towards him just two meters away. Ah, a counter... I hope there's something in my arsenal that can protect me from such force... he detected. Egress quickly weaved two handseals and sparks of electricity erupted from his mouth. Only a big attack with a large offensive impact can assist me now.. "Raiton: Gian!" blasted Egress. A huge projectile of electricity bulleted from his mouth and headed towards the exploding kunai. The two forces collided as the Raiton blast repelled the kunai just eight feet below Egress before setting off. The resulting explosion weakened the Raiton blast's damage by 1/4 but the attack tunneled down to Maneki's position in a chance to hit him.

Maneki:


Maneki thought he had finnaly got the advantage in fight with the surprise attack with the kunai but when the kunai exploded instead of seeing egress falling from the sky maneki had a bolt of lightning coming straight at him.even though his armor could protect him from the attack he had a better idea.He took off his sword from his back and got ready to use it.Being one of the mist swordsmen it was his mist blade and it was called Pirania.As the lightning was coming at him he lifted his sword and had its mouth face the lightning.When the lightning hit the sword the sword ate it.No doubt that egress would be surprised by that move so he decided to release the attack back at egress for his counter attack.


Egress:

Egress watched as Maneki pulled out a strange-looking blade that had absorbed his technique. Bringing out Sora Juin, Kirigakure shinobi, and that huge sword, no doubt, this man must be one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist! he concluded. Egress's eyes were now glaring with vengeance. Do not worry Yoku sensei.... the avengement of your death... by killing all of the Seven Swordsmen... is about to come.. Egress's wings were still flapping as now he was eight feet high in the air. He was shocked for about a second or two, but was more stunned to see his own attack repelled back to him. Tricky, I'm starting to deduce more of his abilities... with a blade like taht he can consume chakra... meaning even multiple ninjutsu attacks would prove ineffective... unless I.. strategized Egress. He knew the perfect defense against his own attack seeing as he used this particular technique against Gian before successfully and he had learned to find loopholes in his own jutsus. Weaving the Tora, Saru, U handseals, Egress expelled a shield of electricity. "Raiton: Raikouheki!" barricaded Egress. The lightning projectile dispelled when it contacted with the Raiton wall... but so did it. Egress lowered his wing movement and descended to the ground. When he was just two feet from the ground, Egress flapped his wings three times with normal force and he safely sinked back to the ground.

The recovery process is going.... but I think I need to create an opening in order for me to get him.. he planned. I thought a simple defeat was gonna go by but now that he's one of those wretched greats... I must use assassination... Egress was seven meters away from Maneki, and Egress drew out his second and last Ninjato blade.... having three plans in his mind already..

Maneki:

Maneki saw egress block his own lighting attack with a lightning shield.As he saw egress go towards the ground to land maneki put Pirania back on his back.He then saw egress finnaly land and take out a Ninjato blade.He decided to use his funnist jutsu.He threw a kunai into the ground a few feet away from egress with a flash bomb.Maneki quickly covered his eyes and a second later the bomb went off causing a blinding light.Maneki took this time to body flicker behind egess and put to fingers together and aimed them at egress butt.


Egress:

Egress noticed Maneki's metal projectile speeding several feet towards him. He twisted his body into a horizontal position for him to fit behind his wing. Egress covered himself with his black wing, which suddenly started to grow more and more black feathers. He quickly activated his Sharingan and began to weave the Rat and Tiger handseals. Time for me to show him a huge Katon technique... thought Egress. He felt the kunai breaching an inch in his one wing but was more surprised to hear an ignition of a bomb. There was a sudden blur of blinding light that had scarred the edges of his eye. The light had stunned Egress for 0.50 of a second. Flash Bomb...? He created an opening on me?! wondered Egress. Just then, he could faintly sight...hear, no smell someone aiming towards him. Egress quickly looked to the left to see Maneki aiming towards his lower side.

Maneki was already two meters from Egress and it seemed as if he crawled into his own time stop. Any second later and he might be dead. Fortunately, he would have to soon skip to the second phase of his new plan. Damn! cursed Egress. He did not have time to use up ninjutsu much less convert the chakra. So instead, Egress kept eye contact with Maneki and utilized the hypnotic power of the Sharingan. Magen: Kasegui!" binded Egress. He also shifted his Ninjato to his side in order to protect him from Maneki much less than directly attacking him, but it also served his purpose as a distraction. A second later, Maneki would be paralyzed and doomed to his power. In his current state, his Sora Juin would boost his genjutsu for the bind to be more stronger.

Maneki:

Manekis attack was about to hit egress when he shifted his ninjato to block his butt.He was able to stop him self.He then quickly turned around and jumped into a nearby tree.Maneki was wondering how egress was able to see his attack so fast.Then it hit him egress must have been using the sharingan.If that was the case maneki knew he would have to not make any eye contact with him.Maneki then decided to stay hidden for the time being.But decided to explode one of the manual exploding tags that he planted.The one he explodes was directly in front of egress.

Egress:

Seeing as his illusion spell did not make contact, Egress watched as Maneki quickly retreated. He did not clearly seee what he had gone but when he shifted his head towards the direction Maneki had retreated to, he saw a faint chakra presence diving towards a tree. Either that's a squirrel.... or somebody has some sneaky toes.. thought Egress. Even with his slightly wounded wing, Egress rushed towards that tree that he had seen the chakra presence going into. He turned off his Sharingan as the urge to kill that he had locked up now rose to the surface of his heart. He immediately turned off his Sharingan as he would no longer need it. Be quite grateful that you'll be one of the few survivors... to witness the true Dark Raven of Konoha.... flappings its wings again! thought Egress. As he ran towards the tree, an explosion ignited just four meters behind Egress. He quickly jumped as he flapped his wings to protect him from the blast wave. However, a change occured in him that caused him to no longer cared whether or not the blast had connected.

As the explosion headed, Egress's curse mark clustered together all around his body, transforming him into Sky Curse Seal's Level Two! Once the smoke cleared up, Egress's right wing has been blown up. But the Egress now standing was no longer Egress. The man...or creature took the appearance of a humanoid bird or human raven... resembling a tengu! Egress's mouth was changed to a black beak, his hands and feet are claws and talons, his teeth are that of fangs, and his eyes resembled a hawk's. His skin were now sharp, black feathers and the top of his head were raven-shaped hair. And his battle stance and calm breathing had reflected the immense killer instinct that had activated in him. This was Egress's legacy.... the legend of Konoha's Dark Raven. It has been quite awhile since he had taken this form. Egress stood up, a fearless shinboi who was feared among others. His face was calm and quite collective. Suddenly, Egress's left wing fully resprouted and regenerated from his body! Sora Juin's limb regeneration ability had made Egress Uchiha's name famous world wide. Only four people in Konoha knew about Sora Juin's second stage abilities other than its transformation power.

"Maneki Taco.... consider yourself lucky to witness this form.." stated Egress in a more gruff and deep voice. He took his Ninjato and surged Raiton chakra into it. The Raiton chakra which usually appeared blue was now black, stating its power boost to overcome normal Raiton-enhanced metal blades. With the sharpness of his feathers and the lightning emission, Egress's large fetahered wings took off and his whole body charged towards the tree. The Raiton emitting from the blade was spreading similiar to that of Chidori Nagashi. He lunged the blade at the tree and his whole body was surrounded by tremendous force. The impact would instantly breach through the tree and if Maneki was hitted by this, several organs, limbs, and bones would be severely fractured. His original stamina and strength has been triple boosted.

Maneki:
maneki saw that after the smoke cleared egress was still alive but had a lost a wing.Then suddenly his body turned black and he regrew his wing.He then took out his ninjato and electricity started to surge everywhere.He quickly jumped out of the tree and a second later it was destroyed by egress attack.He safely landed on the ground and was about 15 feet away from egress.He then took out hiyomori and took a defensive stance.He was ready to counter attack egress next attack.

Egress:

Egress weaved a couple of handseals as Maneki dodged his attack. He threw his remaining Raiton-enhanced Ninjato to the ground as he prepared his next attack with a Katon. He can absorb chakra and reflect them.... so I I would use turn his advantage to his disadvantage.. thought Egress. A large dark mass blew from Egress's mouth and when Egrexx fully expelled it, it grew into a huge fire blast. "Katon: Zukkoku!" he blasted. Instead of the usual fire, Zukkoku appeared more darker with vile energy. Zukkoku had went through a power boost. The large flaming raced towards Maneki at high speed.


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Naruto Rivals

Egress Uchiha, the 7th Mizukage, become his work in his office. he was busy filling out reports, paperwork, and mission files that is filled with constant pleas from foreign countries. Ever since the 4th Great Ninja World War has ended and two months after he had left Konoha, Egress was assigned by "them" to conquer this one who he has no interest in. But after a few years as their leadeer, he begins to feel the responsibility he had felt them, not to mention what he had done to Rokudaime Mizukage, he had alot to take care of before he can join them. He smiled and reassured himself that he's now a member of the Five Great Nations, that had always cheered him up. He then took a big breath, and lowered his head, contuining with his work.

Sigh, the shinobi here are pretty strong.. not to mention their manners.. Egress thought. It had been three decades ever since Kirigakure has earned its nickname the "Village of the Bloody Mist" and become the most feared country over all of the other countries. Their system of creating and breeding talented and amazing warriors was successful and their ninja were always elite, strong, and follows the Code of Shinobi. But that was around 30 years ago, the so-called BloodMist Village returned to its normal state and their nightmare was over, they were just ordinary, Godaime Mizukage has assured that peace would be kept. The 6th Mizukage even thought about restoring the Mist Village back to its feared status, but he had failed in that plan. Until Egress Uchiha came...

Now the current Mizukage is up to something extraorindary. He plans to restore the way people graduate from the Academy as a free-for-all deathmatch! But in order to keep the happiness of people, Lord Mizukage assured that the top 6 survivors, regardless of grades or talent, would promote to Genin. As even inside the weak and poor shinboi of Kirigakure's Academy, once the melee graduation exam begins, he'll seek out true killer instinct and that's what all shinboi of Kirigakure is hammered into them: Murderous Intent. They all have to will to fight on and risk their lives for the village, to brutally and forcefully slaughter everyone even their own comrades, to withstand gruesome tasks and crush all of those in their way, in just three months ever since Egress became the Mizukage, the Mist Village became bloody again and is feared across the entire ninja world.

Egress smiled knowing his plan has worked, Kirigakure's Assassination Squads are fearsome and the Jounin are emotionless, or so it appears. Even the toughest fighters in the Village of the Bloody Mist, including Genin, Chunin, Jounin, Hunter-Nins, and even his "trustworthy" advisors, their strength nor prowess could match Egress's own, as they would be easily be controlled by his ocular eyes, that's why it's wise to not look into the Mizukage's eyes if you're talking to him. Happy to know that he's leading a very elite country, even during these times of peace and luxury, where money and raising prodigies were no longer a concern to the shinobi villages, the Renaissance was truly helpful in massively increasing the economy. Finishing filling out a D-rank mission plea, he grew bored and awaited for someone to enter through that door and ask for a mission....
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As soon as Egress saw the smoke, he pulled out a kunai. Concealing himself so soon... is he going to use a Doton technique..? wondered Egress. Suddenly, as the smoke begins to diminish, he sees a dark figure- doing absolutely nothing. "What's this..?" said Egress. he began to make sense of this as his eyes adjusted to see what laid in the smoke. It was Suzumo... but he was not.. moving. Not moving..? Impossible... how can this be? But it was true, Egress couldn't even see the Suzumo figure moving an inch. So is this a Bunshin? No matter... not like it would stand a chance against anything... However, what would happen next surprised him evermore. He reacted instantly when Suzumo had launched blades from him. The way it was done was weird, but Egress's anticipation was too late. So he can move... but the Bunshin is containing such weapons.... and he's moving in a zig-zag formation.. possibly so my Sharingan can have trouble keeping up. he analyzed. Egress threw his one kunai and then reached into his ninja pouch at the same time. He pulled out four shurikens and threw them as well to block the blades.

"Alright, I might as well pull out your full potential," promised Egress. Quickly weaving six handseals in merely two seconds, he releashed a Fire Style technique. "Katon: Goukakyuu!" Instantly, he spewed a huge wave of fire towards the upcoming blocks and to stop Suzumo in his tracks if he comes to close. What will happen next?


Mura of Shinobi:


As his attack failed and from the moment he had jumped he was immediately pulled down, right into his enemy's area! Expecting a counter from the Hokage, Egress tried to react to it but the gravity seemed to have been pulling down his weights and he felt his bones had become weaker, as he's sweating long beads of sweat. He was then kicked by a swift kick to the chest, Egress had only a moment to move a little to the left, but the attack was strong enough to send him tumbling down the floor. Attempting to rebound, he actually just held himself to the ground like an animal. He jumped up but was pulled down by the immense force and he struggled to land on his feet.

Hearing the words from the Hokage's advice, he decided to follow it for awhile, until he could get use to this type of training, he would have to avoid aerial attacks, which can almost make his evasion dodges difficult. Getting up, he began to anticipate he Hokage's next movements and to expect his incoming attacks. This could be useful, I could get use to perceiving motions without the assistance of the Sharingan.. he thought. "Ah yes, you're very much correct Lord Hokage.." he said. "The increased gravity pulls me down much quicker than usual, so it limits my fighting style, however it can also..." Thinking of a strategy, the gravity pulling him down in that well can assist him in using ninjutsu, but it requires accurate thinking to use it correctly...

He felt as he had little chance in completing his task, as it seems the Hokage had a better experience in this type of training and he was new to such things. He then sees the Hokage moving his hands and throwing something invisible, or it could be nothing at all. But like it was said, there was no point in wasting energy and performing useless things, it is important to perceive as much stamina as possibly. This could be Ninpou... or Fuuton but... Egress thought due to previous encounters with enemy ninjutsu. He lifted both of his hands over his head, and anticipating it, he felt two painful forces leveling at him and he was knocked back violently.

Focusing chakra on his hands as the two blasts connected, he was flipped over and then with his hands pressed to the ground, he flipped himself back up! Hmm.. intruiging.. it was Fuuton after all.. It might appear that Egress was actually dodging and evading the Hokage's attacks, but it is actually to Egress, that he's "experimenting" and utilizing whatever advantages and uses this new technology has offered to him and use it against his enemy. He felt two sharp pains in his chest, but he did his best to ignore it, or most of it. "Alright then Lord Hokage... guess it's my move now.." he said. In three seconds, Egress flickered six handseals and molded chakra in his gullet. "Katon: Goukakyuu!" he conjoured. Egress blasted out a huge fireball heading towards Lord Hokage, just in time for a stranger to walk in and ask for Egress's name.. Hmm..?
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Childhood/Pre-Academy/Academy Arc:
Kiyomi Senshin was the son of Gekka Senshin and Yukiyo Senshin. Gekka was a top shinobi among the Jounin Elite and Yukiyo was a maid to a Water Country noble and a former elite samurai. During such times, Kirigakure was ruled by Nidaime Mizukage under a civil war where certain clans with powerful bloodlines were feared and ordered to be executed. Like many other clans, the Senshin clan was on the top of their wanted list as their power was feared the most. Luckily, the Senshins's base were located in a remote, underwater area just around the inner borders of Kirigakure. They used false names and kept secrecy. Kiyomi Senshin was known as Kiyomi Sekkou. He was taught the basic principles of espionage and self-defense at the age of 5. Kiyomi entered the Ninja Academy at age 6. Kiyomi learned about Kirigakure's history, geography, and basic techniques. He excelled in all ninja arts except for genjutsu due to his hardworking habits and constant studying. His Kuroshuu abilities were awakened at the age of 7 when blob particles finally birthed in his body. The entire Senshin clan were excited and interested in Kiyomi for he attained the clan's most rarest and sacred kekkei genkai. At that time, there were only five Kuroshuu users excluding Kiyomi, a rare record as well. However, his inner blob was different and more advanced, as it had a "living", but obedient mind that can actually communicate with Kiyomi. He was taught secretly within the clan's base Kuroshuu techniques by two Kuroshuu users. He finally graduated second-top of his class at age 10 from the Academy with high intelligence, average chakra control, but above-average Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Weaponry skills. Also, at age 9, Kiyomi had learned and gained his first affinity- the Suiton element. Because he had to work as a self-spy and live in secrecy, his goal became clear to him that he must free his clan's destiny, end the civil war, and have his powers be used without fear. But Kiyomi had to be more careful now. Because of Kirigakure's strict policy in the Graduation Exams to develop elite and top-level shinobi, Kiyomi had to kill his fellow classmates in order to become a Genin. He pitted against other students but never used his Kuroshuu powers. His near-prodigical skills and intelligence helped him overcome his opponents and was able to kill twenty-six people at the mere age of ten with a single kunai. Blood flourished on his body as he also suffered severe wounds especially around his chest. He along with seventeen other graduates advanced to the rank of Genin.

Genin Arc:
Kiyomi became a Genin at age 10 and was placed in a three-man cell with Daisuke Momochi and Hikaru Kurosaki along with their Jounin sensei and former Hunter-Nin black op member Shizei Hozuki. Teamwork and coordination was poor among the cell mates but the team was no doubt the best squad in Kiyomi's generation. Along with Kiyomi's main goal, all three Genin possess a common dream: To become one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. The team completed 36 D-ranks and 28 C-ranks, but their overall strength and skill were constantly increasing. There was rivalry and hate among the Genin cell mates and Shizei Hozuki had mainly nurtured his students. Since every single member of Team Shizei had the Suiton affinity except for Daisuke who had Doton, learning Suiton ninjutsu was pretty much easy. Kiyomi mastered the Hidden Mist technique, a couple of C-rank elementals, and even the Suijinheki technique. However, he mainly focused on his Taijutsu capabilities. Every hour in his clan's field and village's training grounds, he would process harsh excercises that increases his stamina and raw strength considerably. After Team Shizei's Genin members were Advanced Genin with excellent Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Weaponry training, they were off to the Chunin Exams. Although Kiyomi was a trained spy and knowledgable in the arts of espionage taught by the Senshin clan, he didn't rely on that much as he just used his superior intelligence alone. When it came to the Forest of Death part, this is when his skill as shinobi was tested. When Hikaru and Kiyomi were sent on recon, they encountered Ganeki Hyuuga. Hikaru charged in with ruthless power at ganeki but was soon dispatched and disabled by Ganeki's Byakugan. Ganeki's speed was faster than Kiyomi's and his Juuken style easily weakened his muscle strength. Ganeki sealed 287 of Kiyomi's overall chakra points and he was unable to utilize chakra much less stamina. When it all came to an end, Kiyomi had given up his mind to his Kuroshuu. Instantly, the blob inside of Kiyomi rushed out of the wounds inflicted on him and defended him from Ganeki's attacks. The blob binded Ganeki and imprisoned him. The blob entered Ganeki's body in a few seconds and began to "leech" out blood, revealing Kuroshuu. Once Ganeki's blood level was reduced to only two cups, Kiyomi hardened Kuroshuu into solid projectiles and used it to pierce through Ganeki's lungs who would die in several minutes. Hikaru was shock by the revealment but Kiyomi begged to him that he will not tell a soul. Hikaru promised and the two began to "trust" each other. They returned to camp where Daisuke already found the opposite scroll. They made it to the Tower in time to advance to the third round. In the first part of the battle exams, Kiyomi had to face Sanada Sarutobi and Shuko Senju. Kiyomi defeated Sanada Sarutobi but lost to Shuko. At the end, his skills and strength were great enough that he was evaluated by the judges to advance to the rank of Chunin.

Chunin Arc:

Kiyomi graduated to Chunin at age 12, where he became recongnized as a successful shinobi. He departed himself from his Genin teammates but remained close with Shizei Hozuki. Shizei taught Kiyom various high level Suiton ninjutsu that proved useful throughout his future, where he also developed two of his own elemental techniques from the B-ranks and A-ranks he learned. However, Hikaru, being a decieving ninja told the new Mizukage who had murdered the previous Mizukage, Lord Susanoo about Kiyomi's Kuroshuu bloodline abilities. Kiyomi was arrested and thrown in Kirigakure's Prison for two weeks, where he'd be executed for two weeks. When his execution point came, he was marked to be beheaded by the great wielder of the Executioner's Blade, Sandayu Momochi. Kiyomi showed no fear but had thoughts on how he had left his family. However, Sandayu hesitated to decipitate the young boy which gave Kiyomi the chance to reveal Kuroshuu. The blob repelled the witnessers and binded them to the walls. Kuroshuu also binded Sandayu's arms together. Kiyomi tried to run out of the execution area but was stop by Lord Susanoo. Although Kiyomi did use his Kuroshuu and the Suitons he had mastered, Susanoo easily defeated and slaughtered Kiyomi in just three minutes. The witnessers freed themselves and proceeded to execute Kiyomi themselves but Susanoo stopped them. Devious as he saw, the man was quite smart and resourceful. He told them that Kiyomi could be a useful tool, a weapon of destruction that shall prove its use. Lord Susanoo personally selected selected Kiyomi as an ANBU Black Op in Kirigkaure's Hunter-Nins. Kiyomi was granted special permission and authorization to use his powers for Lord Mizukage Susanoo and Kirigakure to only protect the village. The rest of his clan, however,'s fate was not changed. Kiyomi with his crafty spy skills convinced Kiyomi that he was indeed an abandoned orphan and was the last Kuroshuu user and had no knowledge of the Senshin clan. From that day, he journeyed on harsh and top-secret missions at the age of 13. He was taught military secrets, how to track rouges, and high level techniques. There, Kiyomi learned the Kenjutsu skill. As his training was extremely progressive, his kenjutsu skills were successfully developed. A war between Kirigakure and Konohagakure had broke out. He went on deathly battles to fight for Kirigakure's survival.. During the war before it came to a close, Kiyomi killed 476 people, varing from Genin, Chunin being the most, and Jounin. Because he was given special permission by the loathed Mizukage Susanoo, he used his Kuroshuu powers without fear. That earned him the nickname, "Kirigakure's Blue Leech."


Jounin

Kiyomi became a Jounin at age 19 when the war, which had lasted for only eight months, had ended and his service was recognized. He became Sandaime Mizukage Susanoo's favorite and sparred with the Mizukage for five years. Kiyomi's power immensely grew the more he fought the Mizukage, as everytime he did, he had lost. But from ever lost, he became more powerful, just not powerful enough yet to defeat Susanoo. For if Susanoo were to be defeated, Kiyomi would have killed him, and the Mizukage knew that. AS a Jounin, he can absorb blood and stamina using Kuroshuu. During this arc, the Senshin clan was discovered and hunted down. All except for three Kuroshuu users remained alive including Kiyomi but nearly twenty Senshins were killed, leaving only fourteen Senshin clan members including those Kuroshuu users to be all that's left of the ancient clan. Kiyomi swored vengeance against Mizukage Susanoo for his tyrannical methods and plotted with other shinobi to assassinate him. As a Jounin, he became highly known for his methods of rendering opponents useless by cutting off their limbs using swords and "distracting" them with Ninjutsu. Kiyomi immensely increased his strength, stamina, and speed during this time period.

ANBU Black Op Arc:

Kiyomi continued and finished his training as an ANBU Black Op of Kirigakure's Hinter-Nins Division. This was selected by Susanoo for Kiyomi to be Kirigakure's Number One Tracker. But Kiyomi was a dangerous enemy with his knowledge of manuevering, evasive actions, and the mind of an elite assassin he holds to think on his own two feet. He specializes in advanced tracking and hunting methods and his senses, especially his sight, hearing, and smelling have been enhanced to greater levels needed to track rouges who happen to be nearby due to tests on his sensory system. Kiyomi has excellent memory of Kirigakure's history and geography. Kiyomi also excells in long-range fighting. He also learned the "Death Touch" style during this time period. Kirigakure's defense and military secrets were now known to him. With so many advantages on his side, he decided to stage revenge against the Mizukage for assassinating his mother and father, Senshins who revealed themselves to the public. He worked with Sandayu Momochi to kill Susanoo.

Death of Susanoo Arc:
Kiyomi partnered with Sandayu to kill Susanoo. Kiyomi disabled the defenses around Susanoo's household and even killed his fellow guards. Once that happened, he let Sandayu in to kill Susanoo, but had failed. Sandyu was selected to be executed and Kiyomi was thrown into a dungeon under maximum security for a few days without food or water. But a miracle had happened. During his fifth day of under the dungeon, the door suddenly swung open to reveal the light. The exit out of his misery. Standing before him was Aisu Hyouzin, who reported to Kiyomi that Sandaime Mizukage had been assassinated. A new Mizukage had been selected, and Kiyomi resumed his position as a Hunter-Nin and Jounin.

ANBU Life Threat One:
During Kiyomi's time within the ANBU Black Ops, he nearly faced death three times. This is the first time out of the three, when he was requested on a solo assignment to assassinate Asumaru Kishin, a Konoha Missing Nin. When Kiyomi faced Asumaru, they took their battle in the skies. Asumaru launched a Jashin Large Blast at Kiyomu who used another collaboration technique where Kiyomi fired a huge Suiton technique to a Kuroshuu technique, increasing its size. Asumaru and Egress barely engaged in close range combat because of Kiyomi's Kekkei Genkai and Asumaru's Doujutsu. The fight for survival was a main component for shinobi. Kiyomi fired a Raiton-enhanced Suiton attack at Asumaru who merely created a flamed tornado at Kiyomi. When it seemed that Kiyomi had the upper hand, Asumaru resorted to his ultimate technique. Blood began to flow through Asumaru's eyes, nose, and ears. Seeing as Kiyomi is too persistent, Asumaru opened symbollic "eye portals" as demonic hands flew from them and aimed at Kiyomi. Kiyomi used Mokusuikami at the hands but every time they get destroyed, they regenerate from the eye portals. Kiyomi immediately figured out a way to completely to destroy the hands by destroying the source itself. Kiyomi launched Rakurais at the eye portals, destorying the technique. But Asumaru had the advantage now.

A giant gate emerged from the ground and opened to reveal a huge warrior statue in samurai armour. The statue began to crackle as its body began to crack. Soon, the statue exploded, causing a destructive impact capable of destroying two footbal fields! The blast wave collidied with Kiyomi, who if he hadn't used a Suiton-enhanced armour of Kuroshuu, he would have been blown to smithereens at the cellular level. But the man was still covered in severe wounds. To his ease, Asumaru was weakened from the technique. Losing the strength to utilize chakra, Kiyomi used Mokusuikami's water whip at his shoulder and spilled some blood, knocking Asumaru then. He then went to decipitate him, ending his life. Kiyomi traded in Asumaru's body for 45 million Ryo, his highest bounty count.

ANBU Life Threat Two:
At age 25, Kiyomi expierenced a second life-threatening situation. Kiyomi was sent on a retrival mission to retrieve the Daimyo's Sceptre. When he infiltrated through enemy base and found a cased sceptre around a wooden dojo, he detected another presence in the arm. A huge, bulky, hairy man awaited him and growled at him with killing intent. The man was Ukosies Kedamono, and the carnage is just about to begin. Ukosies transformed to a werewolf-like beast with demon-like horns, brown-red fur, and flame-like hair. Knowing that his opponent had brute force on his side, Kiyomi shot ten water blades from Mokusuikami, severing a part of Ukosies's chest. Ukosies transformed to his final form, and the damaged tissue regenerated. Ukosies's appearance has changed once more, to resemble a demon-werewolf hybrid. Kiyomi's death is nearing.

Ukosies charged towards Kiyomi with incredible speed followed by a fit of rage. Kiyomi was bashed and repelled by Ukosies's lunge and he was sent flying through the wall and out of the cabin base. Ukosies's came out and prepared to slam Kiyomi to the ground. Quickly, Kiyomi got up and stabbed a kunai at one of Ukosies's vital areas, but the skin was unbreachable. Ukosies punch through Kiyomi's jaw and knocked him to the ground. Ukosies then stepped on Kiyomi's left arm, both disabling and causing pain to it. Ukosies began to mock Kiyomi, but while doing so, Kiyomi spotted a flesh revealing weak spot on Ukosies's side. Kiyomi instantly grabbed a Raiton-enhanced blade and stabbed Ukosies's side with it. The enemy reverted back to their original form, and Kiyomi used a swift Kenjutsu skill to pierce through Ukosies's heart. He then retrieved the royal item and returned it to the Daimyo. The severed arm took two weeks to have a full recovery.

ANBU Life Threat Three

The third and last near-death moment of Kiyomi's life was an assassination mission on Sunagakure Jounin, Hiruma Hitomi. Hiruma possessed the "Stealth Walk" ability. He had the power to shift at supernatural speeds that it would seem like he dissapeared right on the spot, or teleportation, without a trace nor sound. When Kiyomi faced him, Hiruma suddenly vanished right before his eyes. Then, he felt a blade lifted around his neck with a figure saying, "Poof." Kiyomi quickly attempted to knock Hiruma back, but the man vanished once again. Kiyomi ran outside as he had acknowledged Hiruma as the fastest person he has ever seeen. Hiruma appeared six meters away from him and wielded a more larger blade. Kiyomi pulled out seven tanto-sized blades and took a stance to attack the opponent. But Kiyomi's unfamiliar swordplay remained useless against Hiruma.

Hiruma stabbed Kiyomi in the hand, but while doing so, Kiyomi swiftly charged up Kuroshuu on the blade that did so (remembering that Kuroshuu is produced from his inner body). Hiruma pulled the blade away and went to stab Kiyomi's brain, but before that, his hand suddenly frozed. He saw that his hand has been covered by a black substance, and it began to penetrate through his skin and absorb what appeared to be stamina from him. Hiruma used his kekkei genkai to shake it off, but the Kuroshuu had gotten too big and hard for him because of its constant absorption of his stamina. Hiruma was left weak and defeseless. Kiyomi used Mokusuikami and shot eight water blades at Hiruma's lungs, which had disrupted his breathing and he soon died.


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Post by Austin Fri Feb 26, 2010 10:01 pm

Just a note...
He can study how people move, how fast they can weave signs, how fast they are, how strong they are, the techniques they use, and their fighting styles and combine them for amazing anticipation skills almost as if he can predict an enemy's next attack without the use of a Sharingan. - No, this defeats the purpose of the Sharingan to almost predict an attack without it. You may have strong and accurate eyes if you wish, but not this well in perception.

Limb Replacement must CCOT (Cost Chakra Over Time), just like Kakashi's Sharingan, as they are both eternally active.

Otherwise a great application, phenominal.
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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:10 pm

Just a note...
He can study how people move, how fast they can weave signs, how fast they are, how strong they are, the techniques they use, and their fighting styles and combine them for amazing anticipation skills almost as if he can predict an enemy's next attack without the use of a Sharingan. - No, this defeats the purpose of the Sharingan to almost predict an attack without it. You may have strong and accurate eyes if you wish, but not this well in perception.

Yeah, I wrote that wrong. What I was trying to say that I can quickly and easily anticipate enemy movement to predict (a chance it'd be accurate or not) at a little lower level of Chiyo (since she was able to do that especially on puppet masters). Mine's on a more general battle but it's not as efficient as hers.



Limb Replacement must CCOT (Cost Chakra Over Time), just like Kakashi's Sharingan, as they are both eternally active.

Yep, should I use something like percentage subtraction or do we have a chakra system?
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Post by Shikamatsu Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:13 pm

I know i'm not a mod but
ANBU Captain of Kirigakure is taken.
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Post by Sora Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:44 pm

True, the Kirigakure no Kuni ANBU Captain is taken, but i'm suitable to give you a spot in the Defense and Counter unit, but not captain.

That or you can take High Jounin or Academy Teacher.

But other than that, I love the app.

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Suiton-Ninjutsu

Name: Bursting Water Collision Waves
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Baku Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Kisame will expel water from his gullet. This will then expand into a large volume of water. Being from the Water Country, Kisame is at home with this type of jutsu. He can control the water by riding on top of the waves.

Name: Water Vortex Technique
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Daibakufu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

Name: Five Sharks Eating
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Goshokuzame is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Water Element. Kisame will form the needed hand seals and then place his hand to the surface of the water. A shark of condensed water will emerge from each of his fingers to attack his opponent who is in the water below.




Name: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Mizuame Nabara is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Izumo will expel a sticky liquid from his gullet. This liquid can cover approximately 20 square meters. If the target runs on top of the liquid, their feet will become glued to its sticky surface. If the ninja focuses chakra to their feet before touching the surface, they can hover above and move over it without hindrance. This allows Izumo or a comrade to charge and attack without fear of becoming bogged down as well.

Name: Water Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Mizu Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. The range of the clone is limited however, it can not travel very far from the original body. If the Mizu Bunshin is injured, the clone will usually revert back into its natural water state.

Name: Rising Water Cutter
Rank: C
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Suiton • Mizu Kamikiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. He will then slam his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.



Name: Sword of Draining
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Taikigakure Ryuu: Mizukiri no Yaiba (Hidden Waterfall Style: Sword of Draining) is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like a normal blade.

Name: Whip of Water
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Mizu no Muchi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a whip. The ninja can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to whip the crap out of little kids.

Name: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: Mizu no Tatsumaki is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Name: Violent Water Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Suiton • Mizurappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the needed handseals, Yahiko will expel a strong jet of water at his opponent.

Name: Water Fang Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Suiton • Suigadan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals to cause a nearby body of water to form a spinning drill.

Name: Water Wave Hand
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Suiton • Suihashu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Yamato will raise his hand into the air and emit a continuous jet of water to disrupt his opponent's attacks. Due to the nature of water, this attack works especially well against smoke based jutsu.


Name: Water Wall Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Suiton • Suijinheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja will first do a string of hand seals and then proceed to blow out a jet of water from their mouth to act as a water barrier from incoming attack.


Name: Water Shark Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Suiton • Suikoudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals which then causes a column of water to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Name: Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.

Name: Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Suiryuudan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja does a long string of hand seals which then causes a column of water in the form of a dragon to rise from the water and then strike their target.

Name: Water Collision Destruction
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton • Suishouha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. Nidaime Hokage does a string of hand seals which then causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

Name: Water Transport Dispatch Formation Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Suiton • Suiun Suishi no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. The ninja first does a string of hand seals, which causes a column of water to rise from a nearby water source. This jutsu was the preferred method of fighting a nearby fire by Chuunin.

Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D
Range:-
Description: Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist ninja. The ninja causes the area surrounding their target to be covered in fog. The low visibility allows the ninja to silently and secretly assassinate their target.



Name: Great Exploding Water Collision Waves
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: A stronger version of the Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave, Kisame spits out a large amount of water and covers a entire area, with massive waves crushing the opponents. He then forms the water into a giant orb, rather than let it flow out like the jutsu's weaker version.


Name: Water Shark Tank
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Suiton: Suisametanku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water element. First, Kisio must conjour up a large amount inside his gullet and can also take advantage of any visible liquids around his enviroment. Then he would use his ability to conjour up the existing moisture in the air as well as with the visible liquid outside of his body and mold it to spkies. Then, he shall activate the chakra inside of him to Suiton and release it while performing the needed handseals. As that happens, the expelled water shall form into a giant hemi-spherical tank with the head of a giant shak demon on one of its sides. The spikes will then insert themselves onto the tank and Kisio can change its structure as a liquid or a solid. The tank mainly works as a defense barrier against most and high level Katon ninjutsu. Generally, even S-ranks of the Katon element shall be greatly weakened by this tank. Kisio would then have a number of advantages to his side. He can either hide within the shark tank where he can blend in with its colors when it's in its liquid state or make it solid to defend from incoming techniques and to move at a steady yet free pace. The tank stay up as long as it's not destroyed and so Kisio can hide all he wants within the tank.. at the chance of catching a cold. On the other hand, he can use the massive amount of water and utilize it for his Suiton techniques.
Drawbacks: This technique consumes a huge amount of chakra, in which Kisio has a range of using it 7-9 times per day. As for that, Doton Ninjutsu (B-rank or higher) can crumble through this tank- solid or not. If the tank is truly a solid, then Kisio's movement speed will be reduced by 0.5. A notable weakness would be a Raiton ninjutsu (A-rank or higher) striking from the top of the tank at the vulnerable spot will immedaitely crush the tank in half. Same goes for surging Raiton into the tank while in its liquid state would shock Kisio and limit his movement in place.

Name: Water Destruction Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Mizu Toukaidan no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Suiton element. After forming the needed handseals, Kiyomi shapes water charka in his mouth into the form of a crescent-shaped bullet. Kiyomi fires this water bullet at the target(s) which can cause great damage due to its very sharp edge. The bullet's direction can be moved by Kiyomi but only once.
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Raiton-Ninjutsu

Name: False Darkness
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton • Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After releasing his black Lightning elemental from his body, Kakuzu will use the spirit to release a strong bolt of electricity from its mouth. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.


Name: Sparking Electric Needle
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Raiton • Hiraishin is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with her opponent, Fuuka will raise her arm into the air. She will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through her body into the body of her opponent. They'll be paralyzed for two posts.

Name: Earth Flash
Rank: B
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Raiton • Jibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Lightning Element. After soaking her opponent with a Suiton, Fuuka will unleash an electric current which will run along the ground towards her opponent.

Name: Inspiration Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Raiton • Kangekiha is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. Darui will first create a protective wall of water using his Suijinheki jutsu. He will then form the needed hand seal and emit a bolt of electricity into the water which will increase its defensive effectiveness and stun any targets who attempt to pass through.

Name: Lightning Element Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Range: -
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Lightning Release Armour
Rank: S
Range: -
Description: By wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the Raikage can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power.

While using this technique, his reflexes are comparable to that of the Fourth Hokage, making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. By combining this armor with the Body Flicker Technique, he can even dodge the Amaterasu at a split second, as well as Jūgo's Cursed Seal Chakra Blast at point blank range. His strength is also heightened enough to make his strikes cause enormous amounts of damage to whatever they strike. The armor also increases his defense, drastically reducing, if not completely negating, damage from incoming attacks as even a direct Chidori was barely able to pierce his chest. It is also possible for him to charge up the armour by keeping his chakra levels up so he can enhance his jumping power.

In lieu of tailed beast chakra, the Raikage uses this lightning armor to empower himself when performing the Lariat, producing the same effects due to his high-powered chakra.


Name: Four Pillar Binding
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton • Shichuu Shibari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. Four large earthen pillars will rise to surround the target summon. Lightning will then be unleashed to stun the target. This will be the second attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. First will be Fuuton • Kazekiri to cut and immobilize the target. Then Shichuu Shibari is used. Finally Doton • Otoshi Buta to imprison the summon in a gigantic sealed pot.



Name: Shifting Ground
Rank: C
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Raiton: Koutai Jimen is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. Egress runs a stream of chakra on a designated location in front of him. When his opponents come nearby, Egress performs the Monkey handseal and slams his hands to the ground, converting the chakra to the Lightning element. A small but study surge of electricity will emerge and shift any objects on it back just eight meters, in which enemies might fall and land on the earth. Of course, enemies who have a lack of battle expierence or cannot see chakra will generally confuse the technique as Doton or an utilization of Magnetism and they might switch to the wrong element to use.

Name: Thunderbolt
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton ~ Rakurai is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. Egress changes a large amount of chakra in their palm to Raiton and a powerful electric bolt will emerge. The density of this lightning bolt varies by color from blue to yellow with yellow being the highest intensity. This bolt can either be thrown or be used to strike at objects by hand like a sword. It can also be comboed in a bundle to increase its ferocity. It can pierce through most matter and travel at the same rates as Raiton: Gian. The damage caused by the boly depends on how densed it is and results from great to tremendous damage, especially if it hits vital areas. The bolt can breach through most solids and stuns an opponent for two posts... or worse depending on where it hit. When striking with the bolt, aiming it at vital points will cause massive pain and an enormous loss of blood. This technique was originally developed by Egress Uchiha with the unique ability to rival or cut through other Raiton-based ninjutsu by using Rakurai's shape and by applying more chakra than the targeted technique. This could be two thunderbolts (normal to high) or one condensed-charged strike (Very High or above) at the lightning. The bolt is pure solid and weak against Fuuton techniques of the same level of above. (Level B or higher) Also depending on the speed or power it has, it's able to penetrate through Chidori. The msot basic way for it to end any Raiton technqiue it touches is to apply more chakra than the targeted Raiton technique for the Rakurai.


Density Levels:

1. Normal- B
2. High- B
3. Very High- A
4. Super High- A
5. Extremely High- S

Name: Lightning Element Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Raiton: Raikouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. By forming Tiger, Monkey, Rabbit handseals, Egress will convert chakra in his gullet to Raiton. Sparks of lightning will sparkle from Egress's mouth and teeth and it'll extend around his sites to make a hemi-sphere surrounding his front side. Once Egress blows on the lightning, it'll purely condensed into a large streaming wall of lightning shaping into a half spherical barrier with the highest density as a circle in the center. It's capable of defending and crushing most Doton techniques but is most weakest against Fuuton techniques. It's also a confident defense against Katon and Suiton techniques of similiar level.

Name: Great Lightning Bullet
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton: Koraitama is a Ninjutsu techique utilizing the Lighting Element. After forming the Tiger, Rabbit, Rooster handseals, Egress will store a huge amount of lightning-converted chakra in his gullet. He'll then shoot out a large shell-like electrical projectile from his mouth capable of punching a fist-size hole through most types of metals. An opponent directly attacked by this would have one of their body parts obliberated or be stunned (4 posts) by the bullet. Generally, most Doton techniques are weak and are defeated by this technique.


Name: Thunder Wave
Rank: C
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Raiton: Ikazuchi Rappa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After forming the Ox handseal, Egress wil expel a fast stream of lightning at his enemy. This technique does not pierce through one's flesh but sends sparks shocking all over their skin, vibrating them. When this stream hits an opponent, they'll be entirely shocked by the electricity and repelled and their movements would be rendered ( 2 posts). As their paralyzation timer ends, they'll still had a recoil effect on their body that makes them all static and difficult for them to perform and aim jutsu for few minutes.

Name: Lightning Disk
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton: Raidisuku is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Egress Uchiha for offensive purposes. After forming the needed handseals, Egress will convert large amounts of chakra stored in his hand to Raiton. Sparks will grow until it resembles a large disk made from electricity. There'll also be a pure lightning on the circular edges of the disk and a three feet radius from the center. The disk will rotate at high speeds and has the ability to fly at far distances. Egress will throw this disk which will travel at the same rate as Gian in order to inflict very severe damage to enemies. Although it rarely slices through opponents- cutting them in half, the disk can cut through eight inches deep into flesh, which can make opponents rapidly bleed and cause them to suffer massive pain. However, it can be equaled and defeated by Fuuton techniques (B or higher) or Suiton Techniques (A-rank or higher). Generally, Doton ninjutsu have a very poor chance in defeating Raidisuku. Once it does hit something, though, it slowly diminishes to a small stream of sparks. Egress can also hold on to Raidisuku and used it to pierce through other people. Its original development is to harness its ability to cut through almost any metal than to critically damage other enemies. However, the latter is more used than its original. The disk has a limited range of only 25 meters from where it was thrown and if surpassed that range, it immediately diminishes. When thrown, it's not suitable for striking vital organs. The disc can also be destroyed by very large and heavy swords designed for cleaving.


Name: Spark
Rank: C
Range: Close-Long
Description: Raiton: Hibana is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. After forming the needed handseals, Egress expels the Raiton chakra in his gullet out in the air. A spark will fly out and rise high in the atmosphere, where it shall dispearse into thousands of smaller sparks. The purpose of this technique is to send out noticable signals to backup squads to alert their location to them. It could also stand for a few second distraction to enemies for the user to make a getaway.

Name: Static Shock
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Raiton: Seiteki Shingai is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. In order to do perform this jutsu, the user must place or touch a metal object on another object. By running Raiton chakra to the enemy's body through the metal stimulus, it sends several jolts to their body that disrupts their concentration and thoughts. Of course, the technique only lasts for three posts.

Name: Electric Zone
Rank: S
Range: Close
Description: Raiton: Denkuiki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lighting element. Simply by channeling chakra to his hands and releashing chakra from various parts of his body, a huge stream of electricity will erupt from Egress's body. At whatever Doton technique or natural earth element Egress touches, he can then super-charge the chakra in his hands to Raiton to pacify and stop that technique, ending it by sending many short shockwaves to it. Against an opposing S-rank Doton technique, this technique ends and overcomes it.

Name: Lightning Dragon Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Ration: Rairyudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. Egress is able to transform Raiton into a dragon. They can be launched from his body such as arms, mouth, or his skin. However, it's best used by sending an electric signal, or in this case- a positive chakra wave, to the skies to take control of the cloud's electrical energy. Taking advantage of these clouds of thunder, deadly lightning dragons will emerge to strike down on their opponent. These lightning dragons are dangerous as they travel in an accurate and steady rate, actually penetrating through one's target compared to other Raiton ninjutsu. However, they do not share any traits with natural lightning just that they're "at home" when striking from two native areas. Any alteration of their movement is based on excellent chakra control. There could be only a maximum of four lightning dragons at one time because of the chakra difficulty. ["Multiple Lightning Dragons"] These technique can be equaled and shattered by a Fuuton technique of same rank or higher or a Raiton technique of same rank or higher such as Raikiri. Because this technique is quite powerful, a direct attack can cause massive pain, not to mention instant death if one is not careful. This dragon can also be formed from other Raiton techniques just by transmitting chakra to the remaining lightning. Traveling at a fast speed, it'll shock much in its path.

Name: Lightning Sword
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Similar to Sasuke Uchiha's Kusanagi Sword: Chidori Katana, Killer Bee channels electrical chakra into his swords to increase their cutting power. By doing so, his swords are sharp enough to cut through the Decapitating Carving Knife. It is also strong enough to block other Raiton- enhanced metal attacks.

Name: Lightning Stream Vibrating Release
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: This technique allows Raiton users to channel electrical energy into metal items to increase their cutting power and speed.

Name: Electric Pool
Rank: B
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Raiton: Denki Gouben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. Used for a surprise technique and useful against non-chakra percievers or non-chakra sensory shinobi, Egress channels chakra from him to a surface under the opponent or the direction the opponent is going into. Once Egress streams this chakra to the ground under or near the opponent, he shall perform the following "Monkey" handseal and change the chakra to Raiton just when the enemy steps onto this chakra. Immediately, a zone of electricity will emerge and shatter the ground. The enemies who were walking on it, unfortunately, would be blinded by the dust and crushed rocks and paralyzed by the lightning, numbing them to the ground ( 4 posts). This is best used on a body of water when Egress channels it to a liquid surface. Enhanced by the water, the lightning will become tendrils and bind the opponent in place, numbing them, and disabling their nervous system (5 posts). However, Egress would too be affected if he's touching the water.

Name: Thunder Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close-Mid
Description: Raiton: Hikereki Kyuu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning element. First, Egress denses a huge amount of chakra into his throat and charges it to Raiton. Secondly, Egress spews out the Raiton chakra into a shape of a small ball. Then, Egress smashes his hands to the ball and holds it in one hand, where it'll continue to grow until it becomes a massive sphere of destruction! Although Egress can blow on this in order to unleash a powerful, direct attack- he can also throw this ball where it'll travel at a fast rate like a rolling boulder and can crush nearly anything in its path and inflict tremendous damage to an opponent. If Egress can run with this and throw it at an opponent, he can blow off several limbs. Although the sphere will immediately pacify into sparks if it's directly used to hit an opponent with his hands.
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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:33 pm

Kenjutsu

Name: Crescent Moon Dance
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: The user creates three shadow clones that attack along with the user in a complicated sword-dancing pattern to confuse the opponent.

Name: Samurai Saber Technique
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Unique to samurai, this technique employs the concept of 'Chakra Flow', similar to the Flying Swallow and Kusanagi Sword: Chidori Katana techniques. Through 'Chakra Flow', the user channels their chakra through their swords. This extends the reach and the cutting edge of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of energy whenever the blade is swung. The samurai have also shown form manipulation, as the chakra blades form into buzz-saws, broad swords, and axes. Kiyomi is able to utilize this because his mother is a former samurai from the Land of Iron and nearly escaped there with her life. She passed down her training to Kiyomi, though his skill with this particular technique remains inferior to the samurai but is still efficient against shinobi.

name: Seven Swords Dance
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: Killer Bee goes into a pose with his seven swords. The swords are charged with lightning chakra to greatly increase their cutting power. He holds two blades between his left arm and side, one in his right elbow joint, one in his mouth, one in his neck joint, one between his stomach and his right leg, and one in the joint of his right knee. As strange as it seems, Killer Bee is very skilled with these blades, and spins in a manner similar to a buzz saw, leaving no opening for even a skilled Sharingan user like Sasuke Uchiha and a highly trained swordsman Suigetsu Hōzuki. Striking with his various ways of unpredictable spinning, Killer Bee finds an opening and strikes with all seven of his swords simultaneously.


Sakuiboushi
Rank: C
Kiyomi rotates rapidly with one or two swords and charges towards the enemy with this stance to overcome them with this wild swordplay. However, because of the rapid rotation, Kiyomi is weak against aerial attacks and multi-angled attacks.

Kense
Rank: B
A basic but unusual kenjutsu fighting style. By attaching a cord to the handle of a blade, the user can spin it around like a lasso to fight off multiple enemies at once by spinning it and striking with it, warding off multiple blows and attacking from a safe distance. The user can even channel chakra through this cord and enhance it with an element such as Raiton or Fuuton to make it more deadlier.

Bouseki Touza
Rank: A
Description: A basic kenjutsu style mastered by all swordsmen. Kiyomi grips onto his sword, rushes towards the enemy, and starts to spin rapidly towards the enemy. Kiyomi will resemble a rotating wheel. Holding out the sword in front of him, the sword will spin along as it confuses and repels the enemy. On the 13th blow, Kiyomi will strike his sword at a vertical direction then down to break his opponent's guard. Kiyomi will then have a free shot to strike at the opponent's chest due to their failure to react. Then, he would simply spin again and repeat this method to tire them out or makes severe impacts. However, Kiyomi is defenseless against large swords or really fast attacks from the sides.

Name: Death Touch Style
Rank: A
Element: M/A
Skill: Ninjutsu Art
Range: -
Description: Shikyo Souhou is a rare fighting style utilized by ANBU Black Ops. This art focuses on the user to fire techniques at specific, important, and vital areas in the human body. If they were to combine their own jutsu with seemingly low lethal force at the certain point, they can inflict massive damage and pain to enemies and even incapacitate their defenses and attacks. Also, masters at close range combat and Shikyo Souhou are known to be extremely powerful and dangerous shinobi. Users can also use kunai, daggers, or swords targeting to these vital points in order to sometimes even cause instant death to enemies when targeted at the heart or brain. This can work as well for hand-to-hand combat as they put pressure on these points which can paralyze enemies for a limited amount of time or render them useless. If Kiyomi combines this with close-combat kenjutsu skills, this would turn out into a S-rank style.







Non-Elemental Ninjutsu

[Including all E-ranks, Kai, and Shunshin]

Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Range: -
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.


Name: Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: A powerful jutsu, Ninpo Kuchiyose allows a ninja to summon animals, objects and the dead to fight on their behalf. The ninja normally signs a blood contract with the animal species, which allows him to summon different size and skill levels of creature.


Name: Camouflage Concealment Technique
Rank: A
Range: -
Description: Meisai Gakure no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used by Rock ninja. After forming the needed handseals, the ninja can grant themself near invisibility. So far only the Sharingan eye and its revelation abilities has been shown to pierce the veil and see the hidden ninja. It is unknown if the Byakugan can penetrate the jutsu and see the user's chakra circulatory system.


name: Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Range: CLose-Mid
Description: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Kage Bunshin to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken.
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Kuroshuu - Special Bloodline Techniques - Kekkei Genkai

Name: Black Blob Projectile Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close-Long (0-25 meters)
Description: Kuroshuu Dangan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. First, the Kuroshuu user generates the mass from inside of them, building it up near their gullet. While storing chakra to these masses, the user expels the multiple mass projectiles which travels at high speeds, aiming to stick to its target. As this is the most basic jutsu to Kuroshuu users, after three seconds of the Kuroshuu limiting the movement of the target, it'll start to absorb the substance. This technique is especially useful while aiming for the joints.

Name: Black Blob Beam
Rank: D
Range: Close-Long (0-20 meters)
Description: Kuroshuu Kousen is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin Clan. First, the user generates a single black mass from inside them. Then, the'll expel it at the victim where it'll be less varying and slower than Kuroshuu Dangan but the single mass would be bigger than it. After three seconds, the Kuroshuu can suck out blood.

Name: Black Blob Hand
Rank: C
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Hando is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. The user leeks Kuroshuu through tiny openings in their hands and builds it up so a small amount appears on their fingers or palm. The user would conceal this to launch a surprise attack. After engaging in close combat, the user simply touches the effected hand or slap it towards the enemy to stick the mass onto them. The mass will start to pierce through their skin and suck the substance. Of course, enemies can just peel this off and quickly fling it away to disable that.


Name: Black Blob Shape
Rank: C-A
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Katachi is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Utilizing the production organ and absorption energy power, Kuroshuu users are able to shape Kuroshuu into any shape they want, where the maximum length would be three meters. For gigantic sizes (like the Satetsu shapes Sasori used), it'll cost A-rank chakra. Users can then fire these formed weapons at opponents for a higher chance of them getting hit by the Kuroshuu. Once the Kuroshuu touches the enemy, they'll stick to them and soon satrt sucking.


Name: Black Blob Suspension Clouds
Rank: B
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Teishi Kumo is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kuroshuu users shapes pieces of Kuroshuu and molds them into a cloud-like appearance. With this, they can jump on it and levitate up to five feet in the air. However, users can solidfy the Kuroshuu (3 CP) and they can rise its user up to more higher heights reaching altitude levels of twenty feet. This is mainly used for transportation means as the user can fly on this cloud and reach nearby towns within a few minutes.

Name: Black Blob Dragon Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Ryudan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi manipulates Kuroshuu and shapes it so it can take the form of a long, dark dragon. Kiyomi can freely manipulate this dragon and can even change its direction. This dragon travels at great rates but not only does it deliver a powerful impact equalvalent to that of Konoha Gouriki Senpuu, but it also sticks to the opponent and pins them to a surface. Within a few seconds, the dragon would start sucking on the substance. Also, because it is made from Kuroshuu, part of the dragon can be changed by the user and formed into projectiles or attached weapons, but this is only due to the usage of other techniques such as Kuroshuu Katachi.


Name: Black Blob Recovery
Rank: D-X
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Dakkai is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. To reduce the disadvantage of Kuroshuu's weakness against Fuuton, Kuroshuu users developed a way to make that happen. By channeling chakra to the damaged part or simply weaving a few handseals, the Kuroshuu user can regenerate the damaged mass and reform them together within a few seconds to make it whole once more and it continues its attack. Of course, it can be sliced again by another Fuuton technique. Rank of this technique varies depending on the rank of the technique that this technique is recovering. For D-C ranks, it can only be used four times. For B-A ranks, it can only be used three times, For S-X rank techniques, it can only be used two times.

Name: Black Blob Armor
Rank: S
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu no Yoroi is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. By pouring large amounts of Kuroshuu from their body and outside of them, Kiyomi can generate a body suit of protection made of Kuroshuu. This armor is commonly used against powerful attacks with a hard chance of blocking as the Kuroshuu armor can withstand nearly any attack and can also defend from huge explosive impact. The armor can block B-rank Taijutsu or lower, B-rank Ninjutsu or lower, most metal attacks, and explosions. Aside from using this as a last minute defense, Kiyomi can grab hold of enemies and stick to them, binding them. In just two seconds, the Kuroshuu armor would suck out the substance from the enemy's body and can be transferred to Kiyomi's body if he commands it. Kiyomi can also extend the Kuroshuu but only by three meters. Against multiple and continuous attacks that deals great impact (that are within the withstandment level), the Kuroshuu can reform back to Kiyomi's body to remake the armor almost instantly. In addition to the more elemental chakra or substance absorbed by the Kuroshuu the harder it is for the victim to move, the Kuroshuu can be extended outwards so that it conceals his entire body and cut him off view, Kiyomi can communicate with the Kuroshuu to view the outside world due to his unique gift with it.

Name: Black Blob Wall
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Heki is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi forms the needed handseals and expels a great mass of Kuroshuu from his mouth. The mass would then shape into a barrier that provides protection against techniques of similiar rank (excluding Fuuton.)


Name: Black Blob Parachute
Rank: A
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Rakkasan is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. By channeling Kuroshuu to any of his sides, Kiyomi can unleash it to a parachute-shaped structure. The mass is designed to soften the impact directed towards Kuroshuu users greatly or to avoid immense damage and pain.

Name: Black Blob Tidal Waves
Rank: S
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Tsunami is a special bloodline technique developed by Kiyomi Senshin. By gathering huge amounts of Kuroshuu, Kiyomi expels it all out in a wide, blanket-like blast. The wave would spread and downpour onto a surface. An opponent within the range (10 Meters) would be very unlucky. If the enemy is still away from the blast range, the Kuroshuu would suddenly chase after the victim and lunge for them until they stick to them, get pummeled by tremendous force, or get hit by a Fuuton technique of same rank. Once they're caught, the Kuroshuu would stick to them and bind them due to the large amount of mass. It'll be extremely difficult for the enemy to move. Once they're caught in this technique, within three seconds, the huge amounts of Kuroshuu would begin sucking on the victim's blood. The more blood they suck, the more harder they get. Because of the large amounts and increased absorption rate, all of their blood would be sucked within twelve posts (or four minutes). Once 1/2 of their blood has been suck, the Kuroshuu can enter the victim's body and rapidly suck out all of the blood. The Kuroshuu can even envelope the victim's heart and "control" it as it commands it to beat faster. Pumping more blood, the Kuroshuu absorbs it and the victim either dies from the overlimited heart beating or lack of blood. Either that or once 1/2 blood gets absorbed, Kiyomi can shape the Kuroshuu to cover the victim in mass bandages, resembling the victim as a mummy. Once this happens, the victim will be binded and cannot move. The Kuroshuu will continue sucking blood from all of the body points. Furthermore, even if the Kuroshuu detaches itself from the victim either by great force or struggling, it'll simply lunge back in at the victim as well as all the Kuroshuu, making a little chance for escpe once they get caught.

Name: Black Blob Limb Replacement
Rank: B
Range: Close
Description: Kuroshuu Eda Atogama is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. This is a very useful technique when a Kuroshuu user's limb has been blown off or severed. Simply by focusing chakra to the Kuroshuu, Kiyomi can create a limb that replaces the one made from Kuroshuu that has been cutted off by forcing it through the damaged tissue. Kiyomi can then extend his new limb to attack or blob, or he can solidfy the limb (2 CP) to make it work as a solid limb. The Kuroshuu swells up the pain and stops the bleeding. When an attack penetrates through this limb, it simply slowly reforms back to its original state (unless hit by a Fuuton). This would also have the same abilities as Kuroshuu. However, 2% of his overall chakra is subtracted from him per post active.


Name: Black Blob Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Kuiki is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi molds a huge ball of Kuroshuu from his mouth and uses it for two different ways. As huge amounts of chakra are stored there, Kiyomi can expel this and can push back merely any object to a surface and limit its movement as the Kuroshuu sucks away its blood. Another way can be that Kiyomi throws/pushes it against someone which toppls them over and does the same thing.

Name: Black Blob Prison
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuuro is a special bloodline technique utilize by the Senshin clan. By forming the needed handseals, Kiyomi manipulates Kuroshuu and creates a hemi-spherical barrier around his victim to trap them, cutting off connection. Inside the prison, ropes of Kuroshuu will emerge from the inside and strap themselves on the victim, binding them. They'll then instantly start sucking blood once they do. The more the victim struggles, the faster it sucks. Kiyomi can condense the prison to make it close in, limiting their space as well. By using the extracted blood, Kiyomi can cause the prison to internally expand as it incases the opponent.

Name: Black Blob Hidden Spy
Rank: B
Range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Hitosekkou is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Kiyomi Senshin. This particular jutsu makes good use of Kiyomi's special Kuroshuu abilities with his high knowledge as an elite Hunter and Tracker. Requiring no handseals, Kiyomi produces Kuroshuu as a tiny, hemi-spherical ball. Kiyomi will then swiftly and sneakily attach this blob ball to any surface on an enemy or an item. Should the enemy make an escape, Kiyomi forms two special handseals to activate the communicater ball. This ball is completely undetectable and like Kuroshuu, will stick to the surface. BEcause of its small size, it's also unseeable unless when has a chakra-percieving doujutsu. Enemies with an enhanced sense of "touch" is able to sense and locate where the ball is. Once it's activated, the ball will send an invisible energy signal to whoever produced it and Kiyomi will now know the position of the ball and also the position of the target. Kiyomi can broaden this by using a device that absorbs the energy signal. Being a tracker, he is able to attach this ball without the enemy noticing for long periods of time and use that ball to locate and "feel" where the enemy is right now and whether or not they're on the move. The signal stays strong and it slowly diminishes when part of the tracker ball is being eroded. This technique is extremely efficient but it only lasts for a week. Kiyomi can then go with his ANBU Squad to hunt and kill the target as they now know where he is located. In addition of feeling the target's location, he can construct a device that actually communicates with the tracker ball (because it's cellular) where they can find out specifically which village or country the target is in right now, instead of relying on Kiyomi's "feeling" of the target. This, feeling, however can turn into an advantage to the enemy if they discover its presence.

Name: Black Blob Clone Technique
Rank: C
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Bunshin no Jutsu is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi creates a clone of himself using Kuroshuu as it inherits 1/10 of his power and chakra. This Bunshin can only use Kuroshuu techniques and Suiton techniques. Once in contact with someone, the Bunshin can stick to that person and begin absorbing their blood into their own, making them stronger and harder. Once they dispearse, they revert to a smll stream of Kuroshuu as it lands down the attacker.


Name: Black Blob Monster Beast
Rank: X
Range: -
Description: Kuroshuu Bakemono Yajuu is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin clan. Kiyomi releashes enormous amounts of Kuroshuu from his body and shapes it to a giant, monstrous, beast-like appearance. After this, Kiyomi can control this beast however he likes. The best would walk towards its target, making short trembles. Once the beast touches the target, they get absorbed into the beast's body. Within the body, the victim would find it extremely hard to move if not they'll be completely binded. Within the beast, the Kuroshuu would absorv the victim's blood slowly but in large quantities. The beast can send these blood amounts in Kuroshuu packages back to Kiyomi who absorbs it in him. The longer the victim stays within the beast, the more blood it sucks out. The best can then move on to absorb within more victims and so be able to disable multiple shinobi. Part of the beast can be manipulated by the Kuroshuu user. The more blood it sucks, the tougher it gets. It seems that the only way to destroy this beast is either a high level (B+), large Fuuton technique or a humongous explosion attack. A simple drop of poison can slowly diminish this beast as well except the victims in there have a high chance of getting infected. This beast can also be destroyed by another object with a similiar size that delivers tremendous force. Kiyomi can take advantage of the destroyed Kuroshuu for other techniques.

Name: Thousand Black Blob Rain
Rank: A
Range: Close-Long
Description: Chikuroshuu Ame is a special bloodline technique utilized by the Senshin Clan. Kiyomi molds hundreds of Kuroshuu into small bullets that he can use to attack the opponent. He can manipulate them to attack from multiple directions, multiple angles, and warding multiple attacks. With a large amount of mass, the opponent has a low chance of escaping, however this bullets are actually made to attach to the enemy as they have a low attack power. They can be hardened (5 CP) to be as hard and dangerous as bronze items. When attached to an enemy, they can begin sucking out blood.

Name: Black Blob Pool
Rank: A
range: Close-Long
Description: Kuroshuu Gouben is a special bloodline technique developed by Kiyomi Senshin. After forming the needed handseals, Kiyomi will expel a massive sheet of Kuroshuu. This sheet will be 40 meters in length and width. The sheet will travel across the earth and slip through people. Basically, the purpose of this technique is to create a big area of Kuroshuu for a source on using other Kuroshuu-based techniques.


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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:47 pm

Re-editted my entire app and finally finished.
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Post by Tashigi Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:41 pm

I like your app – It’s long, and well made. But there are still some things you need to correct, mainly with the jutsu:
  • Kuroshuu seems a little OP. Can you explain it’s flaws a bit more?
  • If Black-Blob is the most basic jutsu to Kuroshuu users, but it’s C-ranked and other Kuroshuu jutsus are D-ranked, why is it the most basic jutsu?
  • I would call all of the Kuroshuu jutsu C-ranked, if not B-ranked.
  • Black Blob hand should be C-ranked.
  • Black Blob shape should be A-rank.
  • No dragon summons.
  • Black Blob recovery should be A-rank, and only be allowed to be used twice per week.
  • Black Blob Armor should be S-rank, and both Taijutus and Ninjutsu blocking should be B-rank and under.
  • Black Blob Monster Beast = X-rank
  • For your sword, B-rank is 3 feet instead, A-rank is 5-feet, and S-rank is 7 feet.
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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:32 pm

Kuroshuu seems a little OP. Can you explain it’s flaws a bit more?

Fuuton/Raiton techniques are able to defeat Kuroshuu. BUt this highly varies. Say a Fuuton/Raiton technique is C-rank. And a Kuroshuu technique is B-rank. The Fuuton/Raiton one would win. If it's a B-rank Fuuton/Raiton technique against a B-rank Kuroshuu technique, Fuuton/Raiton will one. However, if it's a B-rank Fuuton'Raiton against a S-rank Kuroshuu, Kuroshuu wins. Basically, if the elemental technique is one rank lower than it, the elemental will win. I'm also started thinking about another weakness. I'll add two more right now. But for the Kuroshuu's other flaws, they're fairly quite easy to dodge in a mid-long range battle. But if it's a close-range one, you better have excellent reflexes.

If Black-Blob is the most basic jutsu to Kuroshuu users, but it’s C-ranked and other Kuroshuu jutsus are D-ranked, why is it the most basic jutsu?

By basic, I meant it should be the technique that's usually the first to be learned by Kuroshuu users. It is the technique that's most known to be used by Kuroshuu users clan member or non clan member and it is like.... the most often used. If you were to fight a Kursohuu user, you'll msot likely see that this techniqeu will be the first and most used. So our definitions (well mine actually because basic is really... the easiest sorta) is messed up.


Black Blob hand should be C-ranked.

Done

Black Blob shape should be A-rank.

Re-editted-ish.

No dragon summons.

]With Kuchiyose? I don't have summons with dragons.

Black Blob recovery should be A-rank, and only be allowed to be used twice per week.

I don't really know why the limit, if you're within a continous technique like a spiral air dome or a Raiton technique like Shichuu Shibari, the Kursohuu will be disabled even if you use the techniqeu or you won't be able to use it before its entire cells will be destroyed. So I request a limit to be higher unless there's a greater example why it should be two.

Black Blob Armor should be S-rank, and both Taijutus and Ninjutsu blocking should be B-rank and under.

Black Blob Monster Beast = X-rank

Done

For your sword, B-rank is 3 feet instead, A-rank is 5-feet, and S-rank is 7 feet.

Done
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Post by Tashigi Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:37 pm

Fuuton/Raiton techniques are able to defeat Kuroshuu. BUt this highly varies. Say a Fuuton/Raiton technique is C-rank. And a Kuroshuu technique is B-rank. The Fuuton/Raiton one would win. If it's a B-rank Fuuton/Raiton technique against a B-rank Kuroshuu technique, Fuuton/Raiton will one. However, if it's a B-rank Fuuton'Raiton against a S-rank Kuroshuu, Kuroshuu wins. Basically, if the elemental technique is one rank lower than it, the elemental will win. I'm also started thinking about another weakness. I'll add two more right now. But for the Kuroshuu's other flaws, they're fairly quite easy to dodge in a mid-long range battle. But if it's a close-range one, you better have excellent reflexes.
Ok, that's good.


By basic, I meant it should be the technique that's usually the first to be learned by Kuroshuu users. It is the technique that's most known to be used by Kuroshuu users clan member or non clan member and it is like.... the most often used. If you were to fight a Kursohuu user, you'll msot likely see that this techniqeu will be the first and most used. So our definitions (well mine actually because basic is really... the easiest sorta) is messed up.
Alright. I get it now.


]With Kuchiyose? I don't have summons with dragons.
I misunderstood one of your jutsus thinking it was a dragon summon. XD Forget that part.

I don't really know why the limit, if you're within a continous technique like a spiral air dome or a Raiton technique like Shichuu Shibari, the Kursohuu will be disabled even if you use the techniqeu or you won't be able to use it before its entire cells will be destroyed. So I request a limit to be higher unless there's a greater example why it should be two.
Well, the technique seems a little OP. Like, anybody that doesn't know continuous techniques are pretty much screwed if you use it in that battle. =\ I think it should be two because any higher would be sort of... OPish because he ca just use it in the three or so hard battles he has. To be fair, though, the limit can increase as his rank increases. It can be three or four once he reaches X-rank.
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Post by Kiyomi Senshin Sat Mar 06, 2010 8:04 pm

Well, the technique seems a little OP. Like, anybody that doesn't know continuous techniques are pretty much screwed if you use it in that battle. =\ I think it should be two because any higher would be sort of... OPish because he ca just use it in the three or so hard battles he has. To be fair, though, the limit can increase as his rank increases. It can be three or four once he reaches X-rank.

Oh, I have any idea. Re-editted-ish.



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Really? But even it it's not approved, don't I have a granted spot (cause I really don't wanna erase all of the ANBU parts I spent in my History)
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