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PostSubject: Shadow Nara done   Wed Mar 10, 2010 12:12 pm

General Information

Name: Shadow Nara
Nickname/Alias: (S rank shinobi only, Please only give one or 2 nicknames. These names are to be implemented in RP as another name your known by. This is to be part of your 'legacy')
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Looks:
Shadow has purple hair normally spikey along with purple eye's that glow thanks to his blood line he normally has a smirk on his face and what seem's to be a scar starting at his wrist.He has a tatto on the back of his neck that is a X one on his chest that look's to be the jashin symbol all though he has nothing to do with the religion.He wears a dark purple shirt and black pants

Personality: Extremely shy, but outgoing in battle. Quiet, believes in peace, but is quite arrogant. Will fight for pride and what he believes in and for others. Often daydreams. Very persistent. Loves to listen to people and is willing to help them. often called "emo" because he likes his alone time, he shrugs these "insults" off and often critizises those who call him this But he will do anything to be recognized and will often rush into battle in this attitude. Sort of bipolar. towards other peoples, in this state he acts even more arrogant and conceited in himself. When in his angered state he will not hesitate to show off his kekkei genkai. In this confusion he has lost many friends. His feelings toward suna are very strong and is a VERY loyal person. He gets most of his personality from his father.
Personality Trait's: (What does your char center around? For instance Deidara was centered around his art work, this is optional)
Catch Phrase: (Does your char have any catch phrase's? Optional)



Clan Information

Clan Name: nara
Kekkei Genkai: Shadow controle
Clan Symbol:
there is symbol there but it matches the back ground so
Clan Jutsu: Name: True Shadow Clone Jutsu

Rank: (Possibly A or S- Rank)

Type:ninjutsu

Element: None

Description: This jutsu is a combination of the Nara clans shadow techniques and Shadow Clone Jutsu. By using a combination of Shikamaru's chakra and his own shadow he can replicate himself and all of his own jutsus. The clone is able to withstand much more damage than a regular clone as it does not disperse with one solid blow. Its also capable of performing jutsu, however it can only perform them if Shikamaru gives it a sufficent amount of chakra. The clone does have it's weaknesses though. It loses power in direct sunlight, it can only perform more difficult jutsus when Shikamaru gives it enough chakra, and has a limited amount of time until it can return to it's shadow form. If the shadow does not return within 30 minutes of it's creation Shikamaru will die. Also during the time the shadow is seperated from Shikamaru he is very limited with his shadow possesion jutsu and thus is weakened.

Name:Shadow Sewing Technique

Rank:N/A

Element:N/A

Description:The user creates tendrils out of their shadow. The tendrils can serve various purposes, such as attacking or binding an opponent(s). After this technique hits someone, it can then be directly transformed back into Shadow Imitation Technique.


Name:Shadow Neck Bind Technique

Rank:N/A

Element:N/A

Description:After capturing an opponent with the Shadow Imitation Technique, the user can then further extend their shadow up to the target's throat in the shape of a hand, which chokes them to death. Also, if the Shadow Imitation Technique isn't making the opponent copy their movements, this can be used to bind opponent's body in order to restrain them. The closer the user is to their opponent, the tighter the strangle will become. This technique cannot be used for an extended period of time and weakens with each passing minute. Light is a direct factor in this jutsu. It seems to make the strength of the bind stronger, though has no known effect on the duration of the bind.

Name:Shadow Imitation Technique

Rank:N/A

Element:N/A

Description:The Shadow Imitation Technique allows the user to extend their shadow for as far as it has sufficient area. Once it comes into contact with a target's shadow, the two merge and the target is forced to imitate the user's movements. Therefore, the two can throw shuriken at each other at the same time if the user desires that. (Of course, to prevent hurting themselves, the user just has to have the shuriken holster in a place where you don't normally have it, like the back, so that the opponent draws nothing when the user draws a shuriken.) If the target is out of range, the user can produce a better light source to increase their shadow's size or rely on preexisting shadows for their shadow to freely travel through.

The major downside of the Shadow Imitation is that it is tiring to use repeatedly; Hidan notes that the ability is subject to some form of diminishing return and decreases in potency after repeated use. If the user is low on chakra, the performance rate of the technique also deteriorates. Insufficient lighting will make the jutsu less effective. A particularly strong opponent can also resist the shadow's forced imitation.



Name:Shadow Imitation Shuriken Technique

Rank:N/A

Element:N/A

Description:While teaching himself to use Asuma Sarutobi's Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives, Shikamaru invented this technique to use against Akatsuki's Hidan and Kakuzu. Using the trench knives' ability to absorb the user's chakra, Shikamaru stores some of his shadow in the blades. With this, Shikamaru can target his opponent's shadow and remotely trap them in the Shadow Imitation Technique. This is extremely advantageous as Shikamaru is no longer restricted to a stationary position while holding down his opponent. This charge is apparently independent of physical contact as he was able to restore it with the Shadow sewing technique

Name:Shadow Endgame Technique

Rank:N/A

Element:N/A

Description:Similar to the Shadow Sewing Technique, the user breaks their shadow into tendrils. Unlike the Shadow Sewing Technique, which exclusively ties down the opponent, the Shadow Endgame Technique's tendrils can grasp and manipulate objects. This gives the Shadow Endgame Technique a wide variety of uses. There are no hand seals used for this technique, but the hand movements resembles Gaara's Sand Binding Coffin.

Clan History:The Nara clan is known for their manipulation of shadows and tending of deer, which graze in a large area of Nara clan forest. They have kept a book with medicine preparations and effects for generations which imply they are skilled in the area of medicine. Among the medicine described in this book are the secret pills used by the Akimichi clan. Despite being considered geniuses, the men from this family are prone to being lazy and hard to motivate. Ironically, they tend to be attracted to stern, overbearing women. However, there appear to be other factors as well. The Nara men seem to hold women in high esteem, and as a result, willingly defer to their female partners. An old Nara quote states "Without women, men can't be born. Without women, men go to ruin. Even the hardest of women will show a sweet side to the man she loves and respects."

The Nara clan seems to have a special relationship with the Akimichi clan and Yamanaka clan. Members of these three families have formed an "Ino-Shika-Cho trio," quite often, named after the first part of the names of the members. The Nara members are the Shika in the trio. "Ino," "Shika" and "Cho" are the names of three cards needed for a highly prized trick of "Inoshikacho" in the Hanafuda






Rank Information:
Country:Konoha
Village Rank:genin
Skill Rank: C



Skill Information

Skill Specialty:Ninjutsu Taijutsu
Main:nin
Sub:tai

Elemental Affinity:Raiton
Main:raiton
Sub:N/A

Special Characteristics: (What things are special about your char, this is optional. This could include special training to increase hand sign speed among many other things.)



Items/Weapons:

Name: (Name of weapon or item)
Appearance: (A pic or brief description of the object)
Rank: (What rank would this be classified as?)
Special Abilities: (What abilities does this have? It can be none)
Origin: (Where does this weapon come from? Why does your char have it?)


Jutsus: (Use the the following template)

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.


Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: E
Type: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A very basic technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance


D Ranked
Name: Raiton ~ Hekireki Kumade no Jutsu {Lightning Style ~ Thunder Fork Technique}
Rank: D
Range:(0-50m)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Raiton {Lightning}
Description: This is a relatively simple Raiton Ninjutsu technique. The user makes the appropriate handseals, and then concentrates a ball of ligthning at the tip of their index and middle fingers. The chakra swirls and bubbles furiously there, and then the user discharges it towards the oppoenent, sending a fork of lightning towards them, hopefully striking and electrifying them.

Sandaa Saaburu - Thunder Saber
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attacck
Description: The user will generate lightning in their hand and then strike their target, causing an explosive impact.
Limit: Raiton Element.

Name: Static
Type: Ninjutsu
rank:D
Effects: Discharging an electric current in your body. Whoeevr touches you will be shocked according to the amount of static it has. It could also protect from enemy attacks and enhance metal weapons.

Raikyuu - Lightning Ball
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Description: The user will form a ball of electricity, which they can hurl at their opponent.
Limit: Raiton Element.

C Ranked
Name: Raiton: Raiengai (Lightning Release: Lightning Dome)
Rank: C-Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Lightning
Description: Using this jutsu the user can form a dome of lightning around him with the highest point being roughly 50 cm more than the user’s height. This dome can withstand 3 D-Rank Attacks easily and 1 C-Rank before breaking. There is a plus to this dome for if the attacker touches it he will receive an electrical shock. Of course respecting the elemental laws if a C-Rank wind attack hits it then the dome lose and crack. This jutsu was one of the jutsus taught to Rein by his father.

Name: Raiton: Raiami (Lightning Release: Lightning Web)
Rank: C-Rank
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity: Lightning
Description: To use this jutsu the user starts by gathering lightning chakra into her hands and performs the required handseals, afterward she will slam her palms on the ground releasing the lightning chakra. This lighting chakra will travel through the ground around the user and will shock any target within the area of effect. The closer the target is to the user the bigger the shock he will get, consequently the further one is the smaller the shock but even a small shock can at least make a person twitch, making them loose focus and such. At genin the area of effect is 10 feet, at Chuunin it's 20 and at Jounin it's 30 feet.



Background Information Shadow was born he was born in the middle of the thrid great shinobi war what he saw made him want to stay out of the shinobi world but his parents urged him to become a shinobi to kill so he enterd the academy younger then most at the age of four in witch he learned the basics he stayed away from most but lashed out at the pepole who came near him he graduated at 7 and was put on a team with two boy his sensai kept him away from his famliy.

genin arc
There sensai gave them the bell test Shadow came up with the plan after seeing one of his teammates speed and knowing of the hyuuga's infamous doujutsu and with his own lightning jutsu they got the bell's after a plan of having the fast one use his speed to trick sensai into falling into a trap Shadow had built where sensai was stuck then witch the hyuuga would trigram sensai to where he couldent move to then witch when he finally got unstuck Keitaro ran and grabed the bell's the sensai passed them and they went home for the next year they completed 50 D-rank missions and 4 C-rank.The c rank turned out to be a A-S rank as they had to deal with an missing ninja shadow stood by and watched as missing ninja and theri sensai fought to which the sensais head was cut off shadow formed a lightning ball in his hand and threw it into the water and shocked not only the missing ninja but his team mates as well to death as he came back to konoha he told them that the missing ninja had killed his team and that their sensai had killed the missing ninja with his last bit of power he is now waiting for a new team that needed a member.


RP Sample:Wolf said nothing as the hand draged him down into hell he said nothing when he hit
the ground he did nothing for hours he just sat there untill he got up and
walked the way to demon king daburas castle when he got there
he walked in and saw the demon king waiting for him "are you demon king dabura" wolf asked

"why do you wish to know" said dabura
"i want training im weak i need more hate and rage to win the fights" said wolf
the demon king thought "fine i well train you" he said "good more power" said wolf
wolf now knew why they called it hell the training dabura gave out "wolf you well be fighting two demons at once today" said dabura

"when i get back to earth the leader is gonna get the butt kicking of a life time" wolf thought as he blocked another punch
from the demons as he then blasted them both "come on allready" he said "pick up the pace" he said as he blocked to more kicks "thats it" he said "DARK BLAST" he yelled whipeing the to demons out "good now for your second test you are to go and get me a flameing sword" said dabura "allright" said wolf

Wolf was running threw the fire pits of hell looking for this flameing sword wolf was stoped by a huge demon "stop what are you here for" asked the demon "im here for the flameing sword demon king dabura wants it" said wolf "if you want it then you must fight me for it" said the demon

"wolf" dabura said "your final test is a fight against me" dabura said as he drew his sword
"fine after this fight may i return to earth" said wolf dabura thought "as you wish" he said
wolf flew at him and grabed the sword and threw it into a tree and punched dabura in the gut dabura then kicked him in the jaw and threw him wolf was gonna finish this quick "DARK BLAST" he yelled and hit dabura with ten blast knocking him out dabura woke up ten minutes later
"you may return to erath now" he said snaping his fingers wolf woke up in a grassy plain "hm back on earth finally" he said


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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:14 pm

Make him a Genin please
Gian is B Rank if I am correct.
Where did you get the Lightning Armor? The only jutsu like that I am familiar with is an S Rank technique.
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Wed Mar 10, 2010 5:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:50 pm

ok here is what you need to change,

Genin can only have one starting element with KKG, So you can keep shadow jutsu and one element.

And genin really should only have one Specialty so remove Ninjutsu or Taijutsu,

Remove, True shadow clone, Its way too high rank for Genin,

Remove Shadow sewing, i know it doesn't have a rank but Shikamaru used it at Chuunin,

Remove Shadow Neck bind, Its a Chuunin level Jutsu,

Remove Shadow Endgame, Chuunin level Again,

Remove Shadow Shuriken, Because you don't have Asuma's Knives.

Please remove Tornado lightning its B rank and your only Genin,

And add more history,
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:52 pm

Completing 50 D Rank Missions in a year?
You must have been BUSAY.
To my memory, Squad Seven completed 8 in a few months o.O
Please remove Katon from your element list for now.
Tornado Lightning - Disapproved, if it can destroy anthing it would be SS Rank. Nooooo.
Kai is D - S Ranked
The dome must be able to break after three D Rank Jutsu
No paralyzation with Static Jutsu.
Your D Rank Lightning jutsu must be fairly weak when you use them, understand?
Genin - 10 Feet, Chuunin - 20, Jounin - 40 (For the Web) And it must be a weaker shock.
Genin can learn one B Rank, Ginny.
He doesnt know any shadow techs, those are just jutsu passed down through his clan. He knows none of them according to his application.
More History Please.
Shadow Shuriken can be used with other chakra sensitive or chakra infused objects.
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:11 pm

i think i fixed everything
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:50 am

How did Static kill your team if its a weak D Rank lightning technique?
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:53 am

Water lightning you see that and our bodys are what 70% water since they were in the water the lightning moved through the water into their bodys killing them
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:38 pm

No, if that theory were true a simple static shock would kill us, and humans could take no electrical voltage at all. Static can not kill, if it was powerful enough for that it would be B-ish.
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:34 pm

I'mma not gonna sit here and argue with a admin i'mma fix it later
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PostSubject: Re: Shadow Nara done   Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:23 pm

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