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Post by jer Sun Feb 21, 2010 3:48 pm

General Information
Name: kichirou
Age: 12
Gender: male
Weight: 120 pounds

Looks and Appearance
Picture: look at my pic can't get it to work
-Description: kichirou has a konoha headband, green and black trench jacker buttened all the way up with green spiky hair. The sleeves over his hands, a puppet with green spiky hears wrapped up in white goss on his back. kichirou has long slim legs medium size feet with toes less shoes. He is has a slite mustlculer body more lower body strength for runing. he is slitly thin but with mustles makes him look a little bigger then he realy is. His eyes are green short and wide. his face is v shaped, has a long and slender neck.
Hair Color: bright green, spiky, flowing hair
Eye Color: black
Body Type: down to the bone skinny. He is has a slite mustlculer body more lower body strength for running. his face is v shaped, has a long and slender neck.
-Height: 5'8"

Personality and Traits
Personality: Kichirou cares about things. he needs to know things.he gets iritated when he kills when not nessisarryand when he kills them with out knowing there names. he would like to tgive them a rifull barrial. he gets mad about when he gives his name to be palit and oponennt doesn't give there name to him.
if he dont have enough information about a person he will not kill them. he fills it would not be right if there is not a good reason for a persons death. he likes to toy with his opponennts to see how they handle it. but gets really cocky and foulish. dont know when to stop toying till they aktuly get a little hit.
he respects his elders of his village and other sencaise. he is set on bringing people to justic by his own rules . but does care about the ragular village rules he follows the villages rules to an extent.
Likes: like to be center of atention and for people to be honest with him. he likes to be around people but also likes to be alone when relaxing. he likes to be at partys and have every one know that he is there.
Dislikes: he hates when people lie to him. he hates to be alone for to long. dislikes to lie to to people but will if haveing to, but he realy dislikes when people play pranks on him.
Catch Phrase: "lets let the puppet show begin now shall we"

Rank and Skill Information
Country/Village: Suna
-Loyalty: 6
Village Rank: Chunnin
-Skill Rank: C
Specialties:
-Main: Puppetry
-Sub: Ninjutsu
Elements:
-Main: Doton - Earth
-Sub: none
Jutsu List:

Name: puppet show jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: none
Description: alows user to use chacra to contrul there puppets

Name: Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Manipulating attack blades.
Rank C
Type: Puppetry.
Element: none
Description: The user makes kunai/Shurikens float in mid-air as he or she uses chakra to control them and direct them to an opponent. Gintoki does something similar by using the strings generated for the Puppet Technique to control discarded puppet weapons for hemself.


Clan and Bloodline Limit
Clan Name: none
Clan Location: none
Kekkei Genkai: none
Clan Traits: none

Weapons and Item Creation

Puppets:
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Name: Copycatter
Rank: C
Description: this puppet can be deadly it has many hidden gizmos and traps can dish out. Anything that can be dished out by openents it will copy and send them right back. it is unique by being able change its form.
Body Slots:
Slot 1: - Arms on each elbow has sets and sets of neadls in them. Fingers has sets and sets of poison tiped neadles. where it ataches to torso has nifes on each arm. up the sleavs there are shurikens up the sleave that can just be sent out when we
Slot 2: - Legs on each nee has sets and sets of neadls in them. toes has nests and sets of poison tiped neadles. where it ataches to torso has nifes on each leg.
Slot 3: - Torso can be canged in to a big sheild for great pertection 3 feet all around its body. witch can also grab someone and crush there bones. can also trp them in its body and slise them to shreads.
Slot 4: - Head has a nife at the atach ments to torso and down its throgt it has sets of neadls with paralizing tips
Slot 5: - Other... a transfermation seal on neadles and on the poison tiped neadles to transform in to any other weapon
History: This puppet was made when Kichirou was born and then was put in storage till Kichirou graduated. Then when Kichirou graduated from the academy, he looked in the storage to see what puppet he would have first for his pupptery skills. He end up choosing copycater without him knowing from the start of what it did or what powers this puppet had. From then on Kichirou has used the puppet, copycater since then.
Puppet Weapon Template:
Name: puppet show poison
Rank: D
Type: poison
Element: none
Description: a poison that paralizes body for 11 posts but takes 3 posts to take it's course


Background and Roleplaying
History: he was born in the hidden sand village hospitle. the hospitle was full of stress.there was so many people coming in for stupid ingurys, miner burns and even splinters. while the mother of a baby about to come waiting in a line full of people with minor ingurys. she went to sit down and then she stared to screaming from the lady the baby came in a bad envirment. as soon as the hospitle realize this they brot a streatcher out to take the lady to the emergency room. there they started to see how far the baby had gotten. the baby was close to coming out so they acted quikly and the baby was dillizered saffly and corectly with no damage. then baby was sent to nercury for the night.

he was raisd by his parents who love him and they were puppet masters that lived in sand village. he grew up in the sand village. he went to school in the sand village where he did very well in all classes but exeled in medincal and puppet jutsu. he would just go home and learn more and more medical and other jutsus by reading books about jutsus. when he was 1o he graduated from the training schoolbut was not asighed cause was to young. now he is 12 and on his way to meat his group after 2 years out of school be able to do more practice.

during his practice with copycater his dad helped him. he showed Kichirou where all the hidden trapes and wepens were. as soon as he should Kichirou where all the traps were at he should him how to realease them. when he could realease them he had to try to aim there durections to hit serten parts of the body to make the mustles hert the worst. As soon as that was finished a year and a half had pased by. then his dad teached him to make a weak poison that paralizes opponents but not kill. and then astered it and a antidont for it.

Family: ken'ichi
-Father: parker
-Mother: jayme
-Siblings:none
-Other:none
RP Sample: Making his way over to the training Area Gintoki seemed to be stuck in deep thought for some strange reason he had trouble taking his mind off what the kazekage had previously said to him, and to add to the matter he had to meet his young new genin at the Suna training field. Gintoki's face looked unkempt and dark circles looked like they had formed from accumulating sleep deprivation, his thick white hair was messy and frizzled yet his look magnified his personality even more than he knew. His lazy attitude and general lack of respect for anyone and everything was very apparent so it was easy to imagine he was the last Jonin to receive a Student. His thoughts on the matter looked bleak he could almost assume that the Kazekage paired him with one of the misfits or rejects that they were sick of harboring over at the academy. But it dint phase Gin he just pressed on down the small dirt paved path that would eventually lead him to the meeting spot, he packed his regular quintessential items he would use in this type of situation such as his leather pouch that was attached around his belt and his Velcro holsters that he snapped on his leg.

Still trekking along down the path Gintoki's eyes ran across a small sand pit that had three small wooden poles drove deep into the earth, the first feeling that came over him was a bit of anguish as he remembered his first day being a genin and meeting his sensei in the same spot. He also recalled how his sensei used to treat his small team the hate and anger he harbored for that man was substantial, it made no sense why Gin held all that hate inside him but he couldn't come to forgive him and in a way he was glad that he had died. Slowly sauntering over to the three wooden pegs Gintoki sifted around before coming to a complete halt, as he sat atop one of the wooden poles he looked out over the desert terrain and cleared his mind. " Many things has changed, and I will not treat my successor as I had once been.." After thinking a bit he let a deep breath fill his lungs and as the cool breeze blew over him he closed his eyes for a few seconds attempting to catch up on some duly needed rest. But as the foot steps of his future student came into range Gintoki cracked his eyes to get a look.

Kichirou Ken'ichi walked slowly with his green and black trench jacket buttoned all the way up with green spiky hair. The sleeves over his hands, a puppet with green spike hear wrapped up in white Goss walks closer and closer towards the training area. thinking about what his dad said "don't let your sensei get the best of u" so Kichirou was wondering what his master would be like. he got over it and just went on. then when he got there he looked around and only saw a man sitting on a stump "hey mister are u may sensei I am supposed to meat him hear but I think I might be late and he left but I don’t know if he was hear or not so could u tell me if he was hear or are u him"

From a distance Gintoki watched as the young Genin made his way closer and closer until he was up close scanning him over a few times Gin noticed things about the boy that were peculiar and sparked his interest, the boy seemed to be fairly decent looking well dressed and his green hair was very uncommon which put him
in mind of when he was a young pup just starting out in the Academy and how he used to be teased by the other children for his strange White hair. With a keen smile Gin popped off the log rising up to stand his hands stationed at his side the white haired man listened intently the Genin's question, looking down faithfully at his hand Gin read off the name he had written upon it, " If your in fact Kichirou Ken'ichi then you would be right." Letting a few moments pass Gintoki spoke once more, " Based off description the kazekage gave me about you it seems they match up... And by the way my name is Gintoki Sakata... The white sands puppeteer..." After finishing his brief explanation Gin stretched back taking in a long yawn after a few seconds passed The Jonin reached down grasping his Canteen, popping the cap off instantly Gin pressed the hard metal to his lips while lifting it up, as the cold fresh water poured into his mouth he moved his tongue around sloshing it around. As the heat of the desert beat down on the two the day grew and in the summer months the heat never leaves, even with the sun set sunagakure was the devil's playground.

"yes my name is Kichirou Ken'ichi I graduated two years ago and they wanted me to be in a team with my class mates but it seams that there is only me" Kichirou watched the man. " so your a puppet master as well at least I will have a sensei that knows the puppet style jutsu." takes a breath " can I call u gin sensei gintoki" then takes of his puppet and stands it up and lies on it.

With a silent nod Gin tucked his hand up away in his sleeve in a split second The jonin had his hand back out and this time in his palm lay a scroll, Holding the scroll tightly in his hand he watched as his student removed his puppet from its White bandaged case, Gin's face was emotionless and as he slowly unraveled the scroll he formed a hand sign. " There has been a shortage in shinobi around here... If I have the chance I will talk to the kazekage about filling our squad.. And now I guess we will start the first phase in your training.. Show me what you can do with your puppet.." Forcing a burst of chakra out his body the scroll in his hand puffed into a cloud a smoke as it faded away slowly Gintoki was left standing behind a human figure that was covered by a black cloak, the puppets face was not yet seen it was hidden beneath its dark hood, it stood equal in size to Gin and with the slightest gust of wind the puppet started to chatter, its hollow sounds perforated through the area like the a bell sounding off..

when Kichirou was done unraveling his puppet was 3/4 as tall a Kichirou whereon the same cloths and hair "ok well this is my puppet copy cater he can look like any thing and shot out any weapon" then Kichirou starts to make chakra strings appear and then shouts out needles from the mouth of the puppet and then puts up a hand sign. the needles transform in a cloud in to a star shurican and goes in to a stump. “so what do you think is that good enough for you or do you want more"


Last edited by jer on Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:01 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Post by jer Thu Feb 25, 2010 12:09 am

bump ik it needs to be spell checked
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Post by Tashigi Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:20 am

What clan are you part of ma? Also, put more on Body type and actually add a description.
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Post by jer Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:27 am

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Post by Gintoki Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:58 am

Genin can have only one specialty, others need to be learned in rp, So take out puppetry or ninjutsu.

And take Off the code on your puppets/Weapon.

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Post by jer Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:06 pm

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Post by Gintoki Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:54 pm

20 posts is too long for a D ranked poison. Reduce it by 15-10.

And take your jutsu out of the code.

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Post by jer Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:01 pm

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Post by Gintoki Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:03 pm

My Approval,

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