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Sora Kiyuki [ Work in Progress ]

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Sora Kiyuki [ Work in Progress ]

Post by Sora on Wed Feb 24, 2010 4:35 am

General Information

Name: Sora Kiyuki
Nickname/Alias: Mizukage-sempai.
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Looks:

Sora is a well built type of guy. With the muscle to carry around the heavy Keyblade, which can change it's form, strength and power depending on the area Sora is in and the type of personality he is. His body is hardly damaged in any part, and can summon and release the Keyblade at his own wish.

His clothes can change too. Instead of using Jutsu, he can use a jutsu that 'enchants' his clothes. The clothes then change the look of the Keyblade into any Josh would wish, but he has to have already used it in pastime battles. The Keyblades Sora has unlocked are:

The Oathkeeper
Oblivion
Earth Collapser
Twilight Blaze
Redemption
One-Winged Angel
Omega Weapon *
Ultima Weapon *

* = Unlocked at Kage Level

All Keyblade Pictures can be found on Kingdom Hearts Wiki - Click here to go to the weapons link.

Personality: Sora is a well balanced guy. He never gets too angry unless provoked, and normally stays the average calm with a hint of sparkling anger at times. In battle, he is always on the calm side. Sora has always thought that the person that charges into battle has sealed their certain doom, therefore he waits until it is the right time to attack, not charge in like a crazy person.

Although calm at most situations, Sora is a very harsh person if he is provoked. He is also very sensitive, and especially touchy. Very tough in battle and out of battle, his personality can easily predict what he is going to do next, therefore is very readable. Although he is readable, he has speed of that which is faster than lightning, so it is obvious that it won't be hard for him to either kill his opponent or harm them if they are under experienced.

Personality Trait's: Mainly centered around speed.

Catch Phrase: "The hasty will die, the smart will run and hide"



Clan Information

Clan Name: Kiyuki
Kekkei Genkai: Crystal Manipulation
Clan Symbol:


Clan Jutsu: See Jutsu Next Page

Clan History: N/A; He doesn't know anything about his clans past.



Rank Information:
Country: Kiri no Kuni ; Hidden Mist Village
Village Rank: Mizukage
Skill Rank: S-Ranked.



Skill Information

Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu ; Kenjutsu
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity: Clan Elements
Main: Crystal (Earth + Lightning)
Sub: Doton

Special Characteristics: N/A.



Items/Weapons:

Spoiler:
Name: The Oathkeeper
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Improved Accuracy
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Oblivion
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Improved Speed
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Earth Collapser
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Improved Strength
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Redemption
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Improved Luck (Means Jutsu have more time before they run out after missing an opponent)
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Twilight Blaze
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Grants Fire Element for 3 Posts.
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: One Winged Angel
Appearance:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Grants the Ability to Fly for 3 posts.
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Omega Weapon
Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Greatly improves all statistics, and allows Flight and Extra Elemental of Choice for 6 posts.
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A

Name: Ultima Weapon
Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Phenomenally improves all statistics, allows 1 extra elemental affinity’s of choice (Only allowed up to C Rank Jutsu) and flight for 6 posts.
Origin: Along with all other of the unlocked blades Sora has of the moment, the Oathkeeper was granted a ‘user’ during the battle of which Sora had to become Mizukage.
Jutsus: N/A


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Re: Sora Kiyuki [ Work in Progress ]

Post by Sora on Tue Mar 02, 2010 5:16 am

Basic Academy Jutsu/Genin Jutsu

Spoiler:
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 0
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu - Clone Technique
Rank: E+
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 5
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Fuubaku Houjin - Exploding Seal Method Formation
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 15
Element: N/A
Description: Fuubaku Houjin is a Ninjutsu technique used by Iruka. Arranging the seals in a square formation, Iruka will draw his target within the array. He can then form handseals to activate the tags and prep them for explosion.

Name: Henge no Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary, Trickery.
Chakra Cost: 8
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu - Shadow Shuriken Technique
Rank: E+
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 15
Element: N/A
Description: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing a giant Fuuma Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second giant shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.

Name: Kai - Release
Rank: D
Type: Higher Level General Skill, Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 9
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu - Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 0-6
Element: N/A
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Kanashibari no Jutsu - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Element: N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 10
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu - Escaping Skill
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 0
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu - Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 6
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Earth Style Jutsu

Spoiler:
Name: Arijigoku - Inescapable Hell
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Arijigoku is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seal, Fudou will create a conical crater below his opponent. This twisting, sinking pit will pull the target below ground to imprison and suffocate them.

Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Kisame can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth. By extending his Samehada above ground, he gives off the appearance of a shark travelling underground.

Name: Doro Gaeshi – Mud Overturn
Rank: C
Type: Defensive Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doro Gaeshi is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.

Name: Domu – Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doro Houshi – Mud Silhouette
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Akatsuki member Kakuzu. After forming the needed Snake handseal, Kakuzu will harden his body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Doryuudan – Earth Dragon Projectile
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and create a dragon from the river of mud made after using the Doryuu Taiga technique. This dragon will then spew mud projectiles from its mouth.

Name: Doryuu Heki
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Kakashi will use the jutsu by placing his hands on the ground. This causes an earthen wall marked by canine heads to rise.

Name: Doryuu Jouheki – Earth Style Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Jouheki is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals. Then a large earthen wall will erupt from the ground. Yamato used this technique in conjunction with a Water Style Takitsubo Jutsu. This allowed him to form a large waterfall.

Name: Doryuu Katsu – Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Name: Doryuu Taiga – Earth Flow River
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuu Taiga is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud.

Name: Doryuusou – Earthen Rising Spears
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Doton • Doryuusou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, spears of stone will raise from the ground to pierce the target. The technique can be countered by an opponent who hardens their body with a stronger Earth Element jutsu.

Name: Otoshi Buta • Covering Lid
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Doton • Otoshi Buta is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large earthen pot will then fall from the sky to cover and contain the target summon. A powerful enough summon will be able to overturn the pot and escape. This will be the final attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. First will be Fuuton • Kazekiri to cut and immobilize the target. Then Raiton • Shichuu Shibari is used to stun and trap the target. Finally Otoshi Buta is called forth to imprison the target.


Lightning Style Jutsu

Spoiler:
Name: Chidori / Raikiri • Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori (a.k.a. Raikiri) is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Hatake Kakashi utilizing the Lightning Element. Chidori allows him to cut through any foe. Later, Uchiha Sasuke used his Sharingan and the training of Kakashi to also learn the technique. It was given the nickname Raikiri after it was said Kakashi used the technique to cut a lightning bolt in two. Chidori is used for assassination purposes. Activating the body to focus chakra to the hand, Kakashi and Sasuke's hand become enveloped by an electrical force. This force is their chakra altered in nature to an electrical current. By altering the shape of the force, similar to an electrical discharge, they can decide the power and range of the attack.

After concentrating all the chakra into the arm, Kakashi and Sasuke use their quickness and the power of the thrust from the chakra to pierce any object with the extended forearm. Because their opponent can easily counter the attack, it requires a Sharingan user to make the technique worthwhile. The Sharingan will allow them to predict any moves their opponent decides to make and send their strike home into the target. Due to the high speed, the force emits a sound like a thousand birds chirping which gave the technique its name. Because of the great amount of chakra needed to utilize the technique, the technique can only be used so many times during the day.

Name: Chidori Eisou • Thousand Birds Spear
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Eisou is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form an extending spear of lightning. Though unstated, this spear probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through anything which stands in its path, allowing the sword to strike its target with ease. This attack may also be similar to Chidori Nagashi, causing the target to go numb from the electrical charge.

Name: Chidori Nagashi • Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Nagashi is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke out of the original Chidori technique. Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, Sasuke is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.

Name: Chidori Senbon • Thousand Birds Needles
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Chidori Senbon is a Lightning Element technique developed by Uchiha Sasuke. Sasuke is able to shape the Lightning Element to form senbon. Though unstated, these needles probably takes on Chidori's characteristics, including it's ability to cut through most anything which stands in its path.

Name: Kagerukai • Lightning Wolf ; Self Named
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: This actually unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, Kakashi will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from Kakashi's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.

Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Lightning Element Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Raiton no Yoroi • Lightning Armor
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Raiton no Yoroi in a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Lightning Element. After surrounding and infusing his body with the Lightning Element, Raikage will greatly increase his speed, power and reaction time. This Lightning chakra will also act as a defensive shield, being able to greatly decrease the strength of incoming attacks, like a Chidori. The increase in speed will also grant him reflexes on par with Yondaime Hokage. These abilities will also be used in conjunction with his already powerful Taijutsu to create even deadlier attacks.

Name: Shichuu Shibari • Four Pillar Binding
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Raiton • Shichuu Shibari is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. Four large earthen pillars will rise to surround the target summon. Lightning will then be unleashed to stun the target. This will be the second attack in an elemental trio used by the ANBU. First will be Fuuton • Kazekiri to cut and immobilize the target. Then Shichuu Shibari is used. Finally Doton • Otoshi Buta to imprison the summon in a gigantic sealed pot.

Clan Jutsu:

Spoiler:
Name: Crystal Mirror Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: This technique is used to create Crystal Clones. Sora makes the Crystal in the form of a gem, which then sends out clones made of Crystal. They have no chakra paths, which therefore mean they cannot use jutsu. As saying such, they are still sturdy and can take a few hits before dispersing. They are not able of physical combat themselves, but when they disperse they sprinkle sharp crystals, which are able to penetrate most material. They also, once through the material, it goes into the skin. If it pierces a blood vessel or vein, it will slowly poison your skin and eventually kill you after freezing your blood. This, of course, can be counteracted with proper medicinal help. The same happens for the crystal mirror technique, but instead if the mirror is broken, all clones disperse.

Name: Crystal Clone Technique.
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: A technique developed by Sora in time of need. The crystal clones have no chakra paths, which therefore mean they cannot use jutsu. As saying such, they are still sturdy and can take a few hits before dispersing. They are not able of physical combat themselves, but when they disperse they sprinkle sharp crystals, which are able to penetrate most material. They also, once through the material, it goes into the skin. If it pierces a blood vessel or vein, it will slowly poison your skin and eventually kill you after freezing your blood. This, of course, can be counteracted with proper medicinal help. The same happens for the crystal mirror technique, but instead if the mirror is broken, all clones disperse.

Name: Crystal Needles
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: Sora creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds.

Name: Crystal Blade
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: This technique is solely used by Sora. He can quickly form a blade made of crystal on her arm, and use it almost similar to how a ninja would use a Tanto. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed.

Name: Crystal Falling Dragon
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once, but it severely wears down the user.

Name: Crystallized Hexagonal Shuriken
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: A peculiar attack used only by Sora. The shuriken used in this jutsu are six-sided with spikes at the sides of each blade, as they resemble snowflakes.

Name: Wild Crystal Shuriken Dance
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: The user surrounds them self in crystal particles and then condenses them all into numerous shuriken which are then launched at the opponent.

Name: Growing Crystal Thorns
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: Sora creates growing thorn-like crystals that follows the opponent wherever they're going.

Name: Giant Crystal Dart
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: This jutsu allows Guren to create a large sharp rod attached to her wrist which she can used to impale a target.

Name: Giant Crystal Shuriken
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Element
Description: Sora creates a giant crystal shuriken, resembling a snowflake, and throws it at the enemy.

Name: Hexagonal Shuriken • Wild Dance
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Crystal
Description: Sora throws a vast amount of crystal shuriken to her opponent. She can use a much advanced form of the attack where crystal particles surround her and condense into numerous shuriken.


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Re: Sora Kiyuki [ Work in Progress ]

Post by Sora on Wed Mar 03, 2010 2:25 am

Academy Student Arc

Sora was different from the other kids. He had an unbelievable control over his jutsu, weapons and his element. The training he was put through was different from normal. Most students did the average training. Learning the Bunshin technique, learning how to do the most basic jutsu, but Sora was different. He was put through training a lot different to them. He had to practice control over his element and weaponry, along with summoning his own weapon, the Jukai, or Crystal Blade, without a scroll. He seemed to learn that to perfection easier than the elemental control, but day after day he just kept with it knowing that he wanted to make his parents proud.

One day after his training, he went to walk home and saw these two ninja walk into his house. He ran in quickly, dropping his bag and summoning his blade. He bursted through the door and looked quickly at the two ninja who had turned his way to look at him as the father stood cornered. He ran over, grabbing a kunai from his weapons pouch and throwing them at them. They dodged, and his father dodged with lightning speed. Sora turned, facing them. “What do you want? Why were you going to kill my father?!” He looked at them, as they lifted their hoods, showing the S burnt into their skin. They spoke nothing, and Sora shuddered. “Y... You’re missing ninja...” They looked to each other, and then turned back at him. “Well well, smart boy. But your bravery can only get you so far... How are you going to kill both of us, knowing that your only an academy student and we, well, we have years of killing under both of our belts” He looked over to his mother. “Mother, get out of here. I will deal with them both” The mother got up, looking away and shaking, then ducking out the backdoor. Sora launched at them, blade in his hands. After making a stabbing motion at them, both of them disappeared with a quick motion, and then came behind him. “Now now, what’re you doing? That’s all wrong” Then quickly, one of them punched one of them with their fist, only to see it disperse. “Wha-“He was stopped with a gurgling sound, then noticed the blade extruding from his heart. Sora quickly pulled it out, now blood stained to the hilt. The body, now dead, dropped quietly to the floor.

The other ninja looked down and then back up at Sora. “You… You killed my brother!” He looked at him, his eyes now red and his face purely angry. “I’m going to kill you!” He hurdled himself at Sora, who quickly put his sword up in defence, only to stab him through the chest. He met his breathe quickly with a pant, then a gurgle. Roxas looked up, shocked that he did that, and then pulled it out. The body dropped to the floor, and his mother ran out. “Sora… Sora?! You killed them?!” He met his mothers’ eyes, who seemed to be just as surprised as Roxas was. “Come, we’re going to the Kage” His father walked out, following him, and looked at the dead bodies. Sora quickly dismissed his blade, and pushed free of his mothers hold and ran at him, full pace, then thumping into his chest. “I did it Dad. I really did it” To his surprise, his father looked away, and then looked back. “You did it son... Good job” The family then left out to the Kage.

Genin Arc

While talking to the Kage, he stopped and thought for a second. “Sir Kage, beg my pardon, but how did the Missing Ninja get through the gate?” The Kage pierced his eye view, and Sora began sweating. “Yes… that’s a good question…” He looked at one of the Jounin at the side of the door. “Check all gates.” He nodded, and within a second, he was gone. “Now, Sora. I know you were very scared then, but you were also very brave. Taking on 2 S Rank Missing Ninja’s and killing them is no little feat, especially at the level you are – or, should I say, were – at.” Sora looked at him quickly, not understanding. “What do you mean; were..?” Silently, the Kage smiled. “By were, I mean you are now a genin.” Sora nearly jumped, but sat controlled and smiling vividly. “Thank you, Kage”.

The Jounin zipped in the door. “They were dead, sir Kage. I found the bodies nearly east Gate.” He looked down, and then whispered something to himself which Sora barely understood. “ Poor Kigoru... ” was that Sora had heard, and he seemed reassured when the Jounin sighed and perked up. The Kage sat up quietly. “Sora. I know you were just promoted to Genin, but by your unbelievable feat you accomplished not long ago... I think you’re suitable for Jounin”

Jounin Arc

Sora had now had it. He jumped out of his seat and launched himself forward at the Kage with happiness. He was 9, a Jounin, and a saviour of his village. Though the Kage forbid him from having a Team, he was still exceptionally happy. He was now the youngest Jounin in history ever recorded. He hugged the Kage, and let go. “Now Sora, there is also another thing I need to tell you..” He looked to a certain paper on the desk behind him. “Behind me is my will. You have been picked to be the Mizukage. I think now is not the best time to tell you, but my ANBU and myself we’re watching you battle. We could see through the window in your house. I must admit, I could not have done it myself” He smiled. “I am retiring this role to you, Sora, once I admit my defeat and my soul ascends to the heavens.. Which won’t be long, seeing as my age is going up and my body is , well, going down.” He chuckled, lightly. Sora smiled, then stood up. “Thank you, Kage-sama.” He looked to his family. “We shouldn’t bug him anymore. Can we take your Jounin to help us ... clean up the bodies?” He looked to the Jounin, who replied. “Name’s Ansem.” He looked up at him, and Ansem had a sinister like look on his face. He sighed, shrugged, and then left for his house.

He walked down to the house, and turned around. No Ansem. “Guess he’s already gone ahead…” He sighed and shrugged off the feeling and continued onto his house.

Once he got there, he opened the door. No Ansem. He turned around, still nothing, and the bodies were still lied down on the floor. “Hmm.. Well, OK” He grabbed both the bodies and slung them onto his shoulders, then walked to the forest outside the gate, and stood in front of the lake nearby. “You shall eternally sleep where you belong..” And quietly, he chucked the bodies into the lake.

He came back to his house, closed and locked the door, and looked up the street. Everybody was staring at the Kage Manor, and Sora saw a shadowy figure in his office, with the Kage backed up against the wall. “Ansem…” He sprinted down the road, but he was too late. Ansem jumped on the Kage and slit his throat just as he was getting to the door. Sinisterly, Ansem turned around, and saw Sora sitting there. He twisted his neck, and Sora crumpled in on himself, then shot out his hands, now wielding two different Keyblades, which he called Omega and Ultima, then bursted at Ansem. He parried, and Sora threw Omega at him, which dodged and smashed the glass and went through. Sora resummoned it, then charged at Ansem. “You killed the Mizukage..” He jumped at him, tackled him, then looked at him. “You must die..” He grabbed a kunai and slit his throat, the same way he did to the Mizukage. The blood stained his shirt, and Sora just got up off him and let him bleed. He walked over to the desk and looked at the paper, which he signed quietly and grabbed it, holding it to his chest. He walked to the broken window and yelled out. “The Mizukage is dead, but so is Ansem. I was too late.. But the Kage has given out a new job to me. I am to lead this village through the darkness” The village cheered, in sorrow mixed with happiness.

Mizukage Arc - Age 22

[RP Starts Here]


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Post by Sora on Wed Mar 03, 2010 4:27 pm

All done. ^_^ Finally.

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Post by Tashigi on Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:01 pm

Why did you put Genjutsu and Ninjtusu info in your looks? O_o And why did you put Keyblade info in looks? O_o Add more to looks.
Just because he doesn’t know anything about his clan’s history, doesn’t mean you can’t put it. Put it.
Sub-Element is things like Fire, Lightning, Water, Earth, or Wind. Which element is he good at, but is not his best?
How many times can he switch through forms, because in my opinion it should be once per topic. Remove Ultima weapon, it’s too OP. Or edit it’s ability GREATLY. Do the same for Omega.
You can’t have Four-Legged Technique, as it is a trait of the Inazuka clan.
No Doro Koushi – It’s a trait specificly for Kakuzu.
No dragon summons.
If you’re the Mizukage, and grew up in Kirigakure, you need to know water jutsu.
……… Why is the name “Roxas” in your history? O_o
Edit your jutsu to comply for your character. >_< Remove Kakashi’s name, etc.

I have seen a lot of better apps in my time. I’m really close to disapproving this, so you are gonna have to work hard to keep me from not disapproving it.
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Post by Austin on Wed Mar 03, 2010 11:33 pm

Suiton Jutsu are not required, just as Iwagakure Nin don't all have Doton Jutsu. Its jsut very rare for him not to have Suiton.
Sexy Jutsu - Denied, this is just a transformation technique.
Four Legged Technique - Denied, this is a secret style of the Inuzuka Clan. Please remove it, or at least be a family friend of a member to learn it.
Please remember to register your clan in Clan Creation.
For your elemental sub choose Doton or Raiton.
Please take the Nin and Genjutsu mentions out of your looks.
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Post by Sora on Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:13 am

He's the founding member of the clan - no History required? 'Sides, I was told it was optional. >_>

The Academy Arc is a former character I had. I saved it and just changed the name. Musta forgot Roxas.

Explain to me how Ultima and Omega are OP. The flight is barely a metre off the ground, and all it does is raise his statisics by a 1000th. Ultima does it to a 100th, but the flight is much less. Mostly flight is used to dodge kunai easier. >_<

The looks are fine. I couldn't explain the Keyblade Forms anywhere else as theirs nowhere to actually put them in the keyblade template.

The form changing IS Once per topic.

The Dragon Summoning isn't a summon, it's a jutsu technique.

Can't edit to comply, since there is no disclaimer on the topic.

Show me a better app, Tashigi. I worked for a week on this, I find that highly offensive and discouraging. >_>

Apart from that, all will be edited.

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Post by Austin on Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:20 am

No I mean, its a clan, you still need to register it.
Reduce Ultima to six posts, and one element.
Fix the rest and its fine.
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Post by Sora on Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:27 am

Will do.

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Post by Sora on Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:31 am

Edited.

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Post by Austin on Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:33 am

Eeeeeh.
Approved unless Roxas says diffrent.
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